Dragon™ Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 [align=center][i present to you... [b]Possibly the best card I've ever made![/b] *claps excitedly*] [spoiler=Best Card Ever]The Skorn Lore-1 "Ressurected" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, place it on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot change its Battle Position. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls this card, you can attack yourself with this card. When you attack yourself with this card, select 4 names of monster, Spell, or Trap cards. Draw a random card in your Deck, and if one of the cards drawn was one of the names of a card you picked, place 1 Vengeance Counter on this card. All card drawn by this card's effect that do not have the same name as the names you picked for this card's effect are removed from play. Increase this card's ATK by 500 for each time this card attacks you directly. When there are 3 Vengeance Counters on this card, you win the Duel. You can attack your opponent's monsters with this card. I chose not to make the inner border gold because I don't agree with how Konami said it should be made! Please take your time to rate this card, and give me ideas on how to improve. The Level I think is kinda low for it, but then again I think it's okay. Tell me if you think it's my best card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Honestly, the only 'good' part of this effect is "When this card is Synchro Summoned, place it on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position." The rest of it is . . . meh. OCG errors in a couple of places; just fix the effect up a bit, and this could turn out to be a really good card. Oh yeah, nice pic. It looks like a pissed off unicorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Dude, putting it on your opp's side of the field is a BAD thing o.o How does that make sense? Anyway, thanks, and please mark the OCG errors. IDK what to fix up, you need to tell me that, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Lore-1 "Ressurected" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, place it on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot change its Battle Position. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls this card, you can attack yourself with this card. When you attack yourself with this card, say [spoiler=]you don't have anything immediate to choose from 4 names of Monster, Spell, or Trap cards. Draw a random card from the top of your Deck, and if one of the cards drawn was one of the names of a card you chose, place 1 Vengeance Counter on this card. All cards drawn by this card's effect that do not have the same name as the names you picked for this card's effect are removed from play. Increase this card's ATK by 500 for each time it attacks you directly. When there are 3 Vengeance Counters on this card, you win the Duel. You can attack your opponent's monsters with this card [spoiler=]Why? When will this be useful?. Fixxed the OCG and spelling errors. It is also OP'd cuz of "you win the Duel." There are only 6 or 7 cards that have that effect (Not counting Victory Dragon). Why would you even want to attack your opponent's monsters with it? it only has 1000 ATK. And I suppose it can attack them directly too when it is the only monster on their side of the field? You could EASILY win the duel with this card incredably quickly. If it was a real TCG card, it would be banned within a moment's notice. Hope that helped enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 The concept of this card is amazing. If the OCG made any sense it would definitely be a 10. As it is it's so wonky (and slightly OP) I can't in good conscience give it the rating it deserves. Please work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 I still dislike instant win card effects unfortunately I'm unsure if there's such OCG for it, right now it just sounds REALLY weird, but I'll give it 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Lore-1 "Ressurected" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned' date=' place it on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot change its Battle Position. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls this card, you can attack yourself with this card. When you attack yourself with this card, say [spoiler=']you don't have anything immediate to choose from 4 names of Monster, Spell, or Trap cards. Draw a random card from the top of your Deck, and if one of the cards drawn was one of the names of a card you chose, place 1 Vengeance Counter on this card. All cards drawn by this card's effect that do not have the same name as the names you picked for this card's effect are removed from play. Increase this card's ATK by 500 for each time it attacks you directly. When there are 3 Vengeance Counters on this card, you win the Duel. You can attack your opponent's monsters with this card [spoiler=]Why? When will this be useful?. Fixxed the OCG and spelling errors. It is also OP'd cuz of "you win the Duel." There are only 6 or 7 cards that have that effect (Not counting Victory Dragon). Why would you even want to attack your opponent's monsters with it? it only has 1000 ATK. And I suppose it can attack them directly too when it is the only monster on their side of the field? You could EASILY win the duel with this card incredably quickly. If it was a real TCG card, it would be banned within a moment's notice. Hope that helped enough. No, actually. It's hard : / You will probably burn to yourself ATLEAST 2k before you get 2 or 1 Counters. And it's Synchro, so it should be OP. If this wouldn't have a win Duel effect it'd be useless for most of the part. But thanks :) The concept of this card is amazing. If the OCG made any sense it would definitely be a 10. As it is it's so wonky (and slightly OP) I can't in good conscience give it the rating it deserves. Please work on it. I'm assuming thats sarcasm' date=' as the OCG does actually make sence, but it is a bit confusing. So, thanks anyway ^.^ I still dislike instant win card effects unfortunately I'm unsure if there's such OCG for it, right now it just sounds REALLY weird, but I'll give it 9.8/10 Great. Thanks ragna. 9.8 is good enough for me.__________________________________________________ Overall, you guys like this card, it seems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FSBolthof Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Weird but good card 9/10. Really WEIRD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Nice card, how do u use boo clan's workshop? I like the foil. U should have made it dark synchro, it would have looke awesome.My bunny is the man: (\_/) (^.^) (")-(") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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