Tormented Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Just A card to advertise my new set Enjoy and Rate Hate n' Comment fix my Ocg up if you could i'm not sure I write It right in some parts lol Lore : This card can only be Special Summoned when there are 2 "Abyss" Monsters on your side of the field. You can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all other cards on the field. During each of your End Phases, send the top 4 cards of your Graveyard to your Deck and then shuffle your Deck. Next Battle Phase Roll a six-sided die. If the die lands on 1-3, choose one of the following effects• Pay 1000 Life Points to select and destroy 1 monster on the field• Negate the effect(s) of Spells, Traps and Effect Monsters other than this card. if it lands on 4-6, if it lands on 4-6, you lose 1000 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 life points should be Life Points also for the dice roll effect, it's OPed. It should be gain/loss effect. You have a gain/gain effect, and the 2000 burn to your opponent is too much anyway 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Okay Fixing Up Now fixd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 oh yeah, and I also didn't pay attention to the card level the stats you have for it makes the level too high. Change it to lv8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Lol Cheers Rag and its done lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 better, NOW I can raise my rate to 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Ty Rag be sure to check my finished set when its done lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 I will, you just let me know the moment you update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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