Maveric, Signore della Miseria

[Serenity the Candyman]

Another idea for you

 

 

[spoiler=Maveric, Signore della Miseria]

 

Effect:This card can only be Summoned when "Domain of Maveric" is on the field and you discard your hand. When this card is Summoned, count the number of cards in your opponent's Deck and discard every third card you count this way. For every monster card you discard this way, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. "Maveric, Signore della Miseria" cannot attack unless you discard your hand.

 

 

Effect:Each time you summon "Maveric, Signore della Miseria" and place it on the field, you may pay 1000 life to add 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard to your side of the field. If "Maveric, Signore della Miseria" is in your Graveyard, You may pay 500 Life to Special Summon "Maveric, Signore della Miseria" from the Graveyard to the field in face up Attack position.

 

 

Effect:Pay 400 Life to discard the top card of your opponent's Deck.

 

 

 

 

All comments welcomed and thank you.

[Stigma_Horrizone]

not bad for a new mamber, the ocg need some work tho, I'm not so good in ocg, sry... I can't fix it 4 u

[Boo Clan]

OCG ~ When this card is Summoned, count the number of cards in your opponent's Deck and discard every third card you count this way. For every monster card you discard this way, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Not bad for a new memebr and OPed as hell you need to add a drawback 7/10

[Chaos Flame]

OCG ~ When this card is Summoned' date=' count the number of cards in your opponent's Deck and discard every third card you count this way. For every monster card you discard this way, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Not bad for a new memebr and OPed as hell you need to add a drawback 7/10

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Not really, because quite a few decks nowadays love duping their decks in the grave. 8/10

[Squirrel Girl]

Good card for a newbie

 

Ocg needs some work

 

It's not OPed since you just discards like 7 monster cards i would guess so it's just 2100 damage and it's just when it's Summoned 7/10

[Chaos Flame]

Good card for a newbie

 

Ocg needs some work

 

It's not OPed since you just discards like 7 monster cards i would guess so it's just 2100 damage and it's just when it's Summoned 7/10

Except its up to chance whether it will be a monster spell or trap that's sent.

[Tronta]

broken. utterly broken. if this idiot existed, mill decks would be top tier by a long shot. marco would be up there too. this jackass can be special summoned ffs.

[ragnarok1945]

OCG errors aside, this is a reasonable start for a new member

 

shame the burn effect is all it does, and that's only the turn it's summoned. So give it another effect while it's on the field

 

7/10

[Serenity the Candyman]

I Have fixed changed him for the better. Thank you for your comments.

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Every new card of this set will be added here.

[That Fat Guy]

I'm going to say what I say to most people who make cards on this site.

 

Why the hell does he randomly give dark monsters 400 attack and 100 defense? He's obviously intended for mill decks. That just looks stupid there. The mill effect is way overpowering, for not only can he be summoned in any way, shape, or form, but every time he's summoned he's cutting the opponent's deck by a third. You don't even need to add burn to this OP effect. And the field spell makes him even easier to summon.

 

I like the little guy, though, he could give mill decks a nice boost. I'd limit the number of times he could do it (like, twice maybe) per turn, since he can send 15 cards in one turn, which is almost as crazy as big daddy up there. Not to mention there are probably infinite loops with gaining life points he can abuse (morale boost + flint comes to mind).

 

Big guy needs a complete rework, little guy needs a small limitation.

 

4/10

[Gawd of Spell]

Nice for a n00b to post like a legend

9/10

[Serenity the Candyman]

Thank you

Is this better?