Scrooge Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Some predator cards,ressembling mostly animals... EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.Once per turn destroy 1 monster you control to negate the effect of a monster,Spell or Trap card. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.When you have no monsters on the field and this card Summoned in Defence position,your opponent skips his next Battle Phase. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.When a monster your opponent controls attacks this card substract 3 from that monster's level.Your opponent must destroy a number of Spell or Trap cards on his field equal to the difference. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.This card can also be Special Summoned from your Deck by destroying 1 Winged-Beast-Type monster you control.The Deck is afterwards shuffled. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.When your opponent controls a level 7 or above monster,this card can attack directly. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.This card cannot be Normal-summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned from your Hand during the Battle Phase or End Phase if "Night Time Predator Skotinokin" is destroyed as a result of battle.Increase this card's ATK by 200 X the level of the monster that originally destroyed "Night Time Predator Skotinokin".If this card's ATK is over 2400 after the activation of this card's effect this card cannot attack this turn. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.Each card this monster destroys by battle and sends it to the Graveyard that card is removed from play.Each time that happens place 1 "Pluto" counter(Max. 3) on this card.Remove 3 "Pluto" counters from this card to remove from play 1 card on your opponent's field.When this card is destroyed all cards removed from play by this card's effect are sent to the Graveyard. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.This card cannot be Special Summoned.This card returns to the owner's hand during the turn that it is Normal Summoned,Flip Summoned or flipped face-up.When this card returns to the owners hand by it's own effect add 1 level 3 or lower monster from your Graveyard to your hand. EFFECT:This card is treated as a "Predator" card.This card can attack a monster your opponent controls during the Main Phase 1 it was Normal Summoned. EFFECT:1 "Predator" Tuner + 1 or more "Predator" non-Tuner monsters.This card is treated as a "Predator" card.Once per turn,during your Main Phase 1,add 1 "Venom" Counter(Max. 3) to this monster.Each turn,during your Battle Phase,you can add 1 "Venom" Counter to a monster your opponent controls.The monster's effect is negated,it's ATK is decreased by 300 and this card cannot attack this turn.You can add only 1 "Venom" Counter to a monster your opponent controls per Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Fix: This card cannot be Normal-summoned or Set. and also, don't give 50 at the end of the ATK hope you accept my comments overall, they're good i give em' 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 there's some spelling errors Fish-type should be Fish-Type, graveyard should be Graveyard for the 2nd card's battle position changing, I'd limit that to only once per turn "place it on your field and add the Zombie-type to it." <---I don't get what you mean by that 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2010 @jjackv2 Oh alright,I'll fix it.Thanks. But why not 1750? @rangarok1945 I meant that the monster re-summoned would also be treated as a Zombie monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 BUMP JUMP THE LAMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Wolf Sif Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Dude one jiant mistake Since there counted as "Predator" you could only have 3 of the monsters above in a deck just like the Harpie Ladys!!! still an idea so 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Dude one jiant mistake Since there counted as "Predator" you could only have 3 of the monsters above in a deck just like the Harpie Ladys!!! still an idea so 2/10 No no no, they're not treated as the same card,they're something like an archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest miura II Posted March 19, 2010 Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Alot of OCG errors 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2010 Fixed stuff and added Plutonals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Selinosauria and Thanatofis added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 yeah the new ones are much better in terms of OCG and the effects are balanced in them, I'll give the new ones 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Wolf Sif Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Dude one jiant mistake Since there counted as "Predator" you could only have 3 of the monsters above in a deck just like the Harpie Ladys!!! still an idea so 2/10 No no no' date=' they're not treated as the same card,they're something like an archetype.[/quote'] took a while but what about Aqua Dolphin when you are using say 1 Marine Dolphin then you can't have three copys of Aqua Dolphin in your deck because in Marine Dolphins effect it says it counts as Aqua Dolphin.And by the way with the Archtype thing for the Harpie Ladys sure there an Archtype but you Can't have like 3 copys of Harpie Lady 1, 3 of 2, and 3 of 3 while Including regular Harpie Lady and Cyber Harpie Lady!!! You should Change the effects to "while this card is face-up on the field it is treated as "Predator"." and if you think I'm still wrong ask around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Bumpacha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHumanNumber Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 If they act like an archetype then do you really need to put "treated as a predator card" if they all contain predator in their name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FSBolthof Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 You only tell the cards are treated as a Predator card, IF THE NAME DOESN't SAY PREDATOR.OCG errors.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 If these cards are treated as an Archetype, get rid of "This card is treated as a Predator". You just need cards affecting Predators to say "Every card with Predator in its name...". Also, major OCG errors, like Defence should be Defense, counters should be Counters, and substract should be subtract. Also, what do you mean by difference in Hellfire Predator Pyrofis effect? The Predator aspect is not very original, but the names definitely are. I can see you put a lot of effort into these cards, so good for you. MY GRADE:6/10 For Originality+ 8/10 For Playability+ 4/10 For OCG+ 10/10 For Relevant Pics /4 = 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Hmmm thank you.And yes,I am going to change this predator thing,but later. This topic has been BUMPACHA'D!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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