New WATER monster haha check it out

[Squirrel Girl]

[align=center]Ok I made a WATER monster. Just wanna have help with the ocg. Please come up with ideas how this card can be better. But i warn You. Don't be mean or i will Kick your hairy a**

 

 

 

Lore:

This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster while face-up on the field. When this card is Summoned, decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls equal to it's Level x 300. This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of all WATER monsters in your Graveyard x 150. If this cards ATK is higher than your opponent's monsters, halve this cards ATK, until the End of the Damage Step only. If this cards Level is decreased, destroy this card at the End Phase.

 

 

 

Image credit: Jazin Kay[/align]

[That Fat Guy]

Edit 2: I have an edit at the bottom that should probably be up here.

 

What? This card is terrible. Firstly, it's level infinity, so outside of limit reverse or some kidna big wave small wave, it's not getting summoned. I don't even think the picture fits a water monster, personally, and why is he also considered a fiend? The attack decrease effect is fine. It's very water-esque, too.

 

Now, here's where it gets REALLY fishy for me.

 

This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of all WATER monsters in your Graveyard x 150. If this cards ATK is higher than your opponent's monsters, halve this cards ATK, until the End of the Damage Step only. If this cards Level is decreased, destroy this card at the End Phase.

 

A pump effect is good, considering he has 0 attack, but why only 150 per water monster? Outside of frogs, who fill their grave fast, you're not getting more than 10 monsters usually, that's 1500 attack. And even in frogs, where you can get say 20 monsters relatively fast, he's 3k. Ok, cool, frog support, a 3k beater who lowers another guy on their field. Awesome. But wait, if this guy's bigger he gets cut in half?

 

That just needs to go if this thing will ever be playable. If you get this guy over 2k it's a miracle in itself, so he shouldn't be punished for it.

 

Same goes for the last part. What's gonna decrease his level? And what's wrong with decreasing his level?

 

Edit: Oh it pumps based off of levels, I guess it can get big then, still though, seems too much excessive negativity. If you want it to pump focus more on the pump, don't give it fairy and fiend and random level effects that won't do anything. I would edit my above comments, but I'm gonna leave them there cuz I feel like it.

 

BUT GOOD OCG 8/10 LOLOLOL!

[Squirrel Girl]

Thanks

 

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