KoLoBoS Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 The third Lord of Xyan. This time it's DZAR-Lord of Fear. These SET will have a few twisted verison's of my favorite original cards. Also you will see that most of these new monsters effects will target something on EVERY YGO card that hasn't be used..the SERIAL NUMBER. MONSTERS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Basic effect i think, not very creative, and it has grmmar problems,but the pic is prett cool, and the atk and def are nice, so maybe 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i love the card. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Nice picture, but effect is fairly basic 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoLoBoS Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Yankeefan. Can you point out the "GRMMAR" problems? So I can fix them. I had to put it like that, someone saying there is a Grammar Problem and then spelling it wrong. It made me laugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Summoned, does not need to be capt Card does need to be also 1 of your 'Field''s does not need to be capt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoLoBoS Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Thanks DJ-Osiris. I also thought summoned had to be capt. Or is that just is your have Normal Summoned and Special Summoned. Maybe I'm still doing this OLD style and need to change how i do them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 nice the effect gets straight to the point and well goood as7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 7/10 It has OK OCG. OK pic but the effect isn't so creative Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Cool.Its a Nice Card with pretty Good OCG. 8/10 (the effect could be a bit less basic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Good pic, a grammar problem, okay effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoLoBoS Posted December 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 Thanks for all the comments guys, I'll try and take them on board when making new cards and try to keep the grammar more realistic. Anyway, added a new card to this army of Dzar. The NIGHTMARE SKULL. As I've said before I'm trying to make twisted versions of some of my favorite OLD YGO cards. Can you guess what this one is? You'll also see his effect is the first in the SET that targets another cards SERIAL NUMBER. This is something new I'm trying to see of it can work. Let me know what you all think. AGain, thanks for looking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 hmm there pretty good, i like how you introduced a new effects\, but Cards after Spell need to be capitalized, and my rating is 8/10 =) keep it up, your doing good! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 A good revamped version of "Summoned Skull". I don't really like the serial number effect because the numbers are completely random Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoLoBoS Posted December 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 HMNISG... That's the beauty of using the serial numbers of the cards against your opponent, with the cards number being so random they have no kind of defence against it. Doesn't matter if its a Level 2 Normal Card or a Level 12 God. If it's serial number ends with anything but a 6, it's gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 Nice pics, but the effect of the second is strange.The serial of a card shouldn't really be part of the game, every card should have a unique one.6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 the card is okay but the pics are awesome. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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