WORSHIPPERS OF ARAMOON, GODDESS OF FALSE IMMORTALITY (Please post if you look)

[Kinkorox]

I like alternative wins, so I decided to make one of my own. More Spells and Traps coming soon; feel free to PM me with ideas.

Thanks to DA and Jazin Kay for the piccys.

 

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ARAMOON, IMPOSTOR GODDESS OF LIFE

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card by destroying 2 face-up "Aramoon" monsters you control and 1 card your opponent controls with 3 or more Falselife Counters on it. When an "Aramoon" monster deals damage to your opponent, place 3 Falselife Counters on a card your opponent controls. (Cards with a Falselife Counter cannot attack or be removed from the field, except by the effect of an "Aramoon" monster.) During your Standby Phase, if your opponent controls a face-up card with 12 or more Falselife Counters on it, you win the Duel.

 

 

 

FORAGER OF ARAMOON

When a card with a Falselife Counter is removed from the field, you can discard 1 card to place 1 Falselife Counter on a card your opponent controls. (Cards with a Falselife Counter cannot attack or be removed from the field, except by the effect of an "Aramoon" monster.)

 

 

 

SWORDLING OF ARAMOON

When this card is Summoned, place 1 Falselife Counter on a card your opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field, you may remove 1 Falselife Counter from the field to Special Summon one "Aramoon" monster from your Graveyard, except "Swordling of Aramoon". (Cards with a Falselife Counter cannot attack or be removed from the field, except by the effect of an "Aramoon" monster.)

 

 

 

CHANNELER OF ARAMOON

When an "Aramoon" monster is removed from the field, draw 1 card. If that card is an "Aramoon" monster, place 1 Falselife Counter on a card your opponent controls. (Cards with a Falselife Counter cannot attack or be removed from the field, except by the effect of an "Aramoon" monster.)

 

 

 

GATHERER OF ARAMOON

As long as your opponent controls a face-up card with a Falselife Counter, all "Aramoon" monsters you control gain ATK and DEF equal to the number of Falselife Counters on the field x100. (Cards with a Falselife Counter cannot attack or be removed from the field, except by the effect of an "Aramoon" monster.)

 

 

 

LOST ONE OF ARAMOON

This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, reveal the top card of your Deck. If it is an "Aramoon" monster, Special Summon it, ignoring the summoning conditions. When this card is removed from the field, take 1000 damage and place 2 Falselife Counters on a card your opponent controls. (Cards with a Falselife Counter cannot attack or be removed from the field, except by the effect of an "Aramoon" monster.)

 

 

 

LIFETAKER OF ARAMOON

This card cannot declare an attack. The effects of cards with Falselife Counters are negated.

 

 

 

HARLEQUIN OF THE FALSE IMMORTAL

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. "Aramoon" monsters you control can attack your opponent directly.

 

 

 

FOUNTAIN OF CURSED IMMORTALITY

Increase the ATK of all monsters your opponent controls by 500. During your Standby Phase, you can place 1 Falselife Counter on a card your opponent controls for each "Aramoon" monster you control. If your opponent controls a card with 5 or more Falselife Counters on it, you can remove all Falselife Counters from it to increase your Life Points by an amount equal to 500 x the number of Falselife Counters removed.

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Tell me what you think so far.

[Gawd of Spell]

OCG errors

7/10 sorry :(

[Kinkorox]

bump

[MibeR]

yah,,good for INSECT TYPE

[Kinkorox]

lol, thanks?

[ragnarok1945]

next time write out the lore, it was hard to read

 

none of the effects are anything TOO original, though they do just fine for insect decks, which I haven't seen much support of, so I'll give them 7.6/10

[Kinkorox]

bumpitydoo.

[Chaos Flame]

I can't read it, I can't rate.

[Kinkorox]

update bump!

[Chaos Flame]

OMG. THESE CARDS IS GOOD! 10/10

[~Oleon~]

Well done - the effects are complex, some of the pics are good - next time get pics from Archives like you did with JK. Not from DA and various other things.

No OCG errors I can point out, after all I am bad at OCG anyways, so,

9.9/10 because of some bad pics.

[Kinkorox]

Well done - the effects are complex' date=' some of the pics are good - next time get pics from Archives like you did with JK. Not from DA and various other things.

No OCG errors I can point out, after all I am bad at OCG anyways, so,

9.9/10 because of some bad pics.

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Thanks Oleon. That's the most thorough review I've recieved. :) Mind taking a look at my other sets?

[~Oleon~]

I'll have a look now.

;D

 

Anyways, by 'thorough' you should probably be thinking more 'Realistic'.

You see, when you get more experienced here, you will eventually get annoyed at those small posts. But, enjoy bliss while you can - a world where most criticism is blocked out by the others dwindling whispers.

 

I will have a look at them now, and will post on the ones I can. :)

[Kinkorox]

Thanks everyone!

[Chaos Flame]

Really, these cards all work together beyond just putting counters on cards. They work to stall by controlling the opponent until they pull off the win condition. Overall, this is extremely well developed.

[Kinkorox]

Really' date=' these cards all work together beyond just putting counters on cards. They work to stall by controlling the opponent until they pull off the win condition. Overall, this is extremely well developed.

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Yep. They're a little project.

[Kinkorox]

THE KINKO GOES BUMP IN THE NIGHT

[White Devil]

I think they're great beside some OCG errors..

Nice pics by the way ;)

8.7/10

[Kinkorox]

bumpadoo

[Gawd of Spell]

it says that i posted here oh well

8/10