IT IS IMMORTAL,,

[MibeR]

JUST SEE A VAMPIRE ??

IT IS IMMORTAL,,so i make the perfect effect of vampire

 

 

 

When this card is destroyed as result of Battle or cards effect, Special Summon it during the End Phase of your next turn.You can pay 1000 life points to have this card may attack your opponent directly. Your opponent can control this card by paying half of his life points and tribute 1 monster they control.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

OCG Fix:

When this card is destroyed, Special Summon it during the End Phase of your next turn. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to have this card Attack your opponent directly. Your opponent can switch control of this card during their Standby Phase by paying half of their Life Points and tributing 1 monster on their side of the field. This card cannot be tributed for the summon of a monster.

 

I also added in the last effect, so they couldn't just "throw away" your monster.

 

You were right in balancing an effect like this with a low ATK and DEF.

 

Pic is a bit squshed, but that doesn't really matter.

 

8/10.

[Shaco]

When do you pay the 1000 life points? During your Main Phase, or when the card declares an attack, during damage calculation?

 

As far as controlling the card goes, if the monster were to be destroyed, with the current wording, your opponent would not be able to benefit from his resurrection effect.

 

When do they pay the cost to take control of your monster? During their main phase, during either turn?

[-SupernovA-]

Technically this card isn't immortal considering there are monsters whom negate the effects of the monsters they destroy by battle (lolwtfitsjustatitlebro) - Yeah I get it, just saying.

[MibeR]

When do you pay the 1000 life points? During your Main Phase' date=' or when the card declares an attack, during damage calculation?

 

As far as controlling the card goes, if the monster were to be destroyed, with the current wording, your opponent would not be able to benefit from his resurrection effect.

 

When do they pay the cost to take control of your monster? During their main phase, during either turn?

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when it is declares an attack,it same right,,either your main phase or declares an attack..:)

during his turn..

[usetheforcehan]

OCG Fix's Fixed:

When this card is destroyed' date=' Special Summon it during the End Phase of your next turn. Once per turn [b']during your Battle Phases[/b], you can pay 1000 Life Points to have this card attack your opponent directly. Your opponent can switch control of this card during their Standby Phases by paying half of their Life Points and tributing 1 monster on their side of the field. This card cannot be used as a Tribute Material tributed for the summon of a monster.

 

The weird thing is, i can't see the pic. It doesn't show up in my monitor.

Average effect. But the Direct Damage effect is deadly and will annoyed your opponent if you can combo it with the right Spell Cards.

 

6/10. ;)

 

P.S.: You better work on your Inggris language my fellow countrymen. Read the English Novels/Books/comics, try to make some simple conversation with a foreigner or watch a Movie/DVD with English Subtitle ON. ;)

[ragnarok1945]

life points should be Life Points

 

tribute should be Tribute

 

"Your opponent can control this card by paying half of his life points and tribute 1 monster they control. " <----for this effect, you need to state WHEN your opponent can take control of the monster

 

For example, if you were in the middle of a direct attack with this card, can your opponent take control of it right then and there and negate the attack?

 

5/10

[MibeR]

OCG Fix's Fixed:

When this card is destroyed' date=' Special Summon it during the End Phase of your next turn. Once per turn [b']during your Battle Phases[/b], you can pay 1000 Life Points to have this card attack your opponent directly. Your opponent can switch control of this card during their Standby Phases by paying half of their Life Points and tributing 1 monster on their side of the field. This card cannot be used as a Tribute Material tributed for the summon of a monster.

 

The weird thing is, i can't see the pic. It doesn't show up in my monitor.

Average effect. But the Direct Damage effect is deadly and will annoyed your opponent if you can combo it with the right Spell Cards.

 

6/10. ;)

 

YOUR MONITOR IS BAD AND ERRORS..dude

 

P.S.: You better work on your Inggris language my fellow countrymen. Read the English Novels/Books/comics, try to make some simple conversation with a foreigner or watch a Movie/DVD with English Subtitle ON. ;)