Brothers Of Chaos Very long Effect -Re-Post-

[Tormented]

I decided to Re-Post this for one main reason I didn't get as much help as I wished I could get so I'd Like People to rate and comment no image credit cause I had to reboot my computer which I lost all my saved files and Fav'd links.

 

 

Effect: Once per turn, select your opponent's monster and equip it to this card. (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card.) This card gains ATK equal to half of the ATK of the equipped monster. While this card is face-up on the field, negate all the effect of face-up Effect Monsters your opponent controls.During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent draws cards until his/her hand has 7 cards.This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect.

 

Enjoy

[T3RA PROWL3R]

That pic is from SGT Frog.

 

Fixed OCG:

[spoiler=]Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). This card gains ATK equal to half of the ATK of the equipped monster. While this card is face-up on the field, negate the effect of face-up Effect Monsters your opponent controls. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent draws cards until his/her hand has 7 cards. This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect.

 

 

Looks like you just threw a bunch of effects together and called it a card. You simply can't do that. For example, you have the Piercing Damage effect, and this card an also Attack directly. Its DEF is too high for the last effect. Scrap the Direct Attacking also.

 

New Effect:

[spoiler=]Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). This card gains ATK equal to half of the ATK of the equipped monster. While this card is face-up on the field, negate the effect of face-up Effect Monsters your opponent controls. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent draws cards until his/her hand has 7 cards.

 

 

Scrap the drawing effect.

[spoiler=]Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). This card gains ATK equal to half of the ATK of the equipped monster. While this card is face-up on the field, negate the effect of face-up Effect Monsters your opponent controls. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

 

First effect should say "until the End Phase" or "If this card would be destroyed, the monster equipped to this card is destroyed instead."

 

New Effect:

[spoiler=]Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card until the End Phase (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). This card gains ATK equal to half of the ATK of the equipped monster. While this card is face-up on the field, negate the effect of face-up Effect Monsters your opponent controls. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

or

[spoiler=]Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). If this card would be destroyed, destroy the monster equipped with this card instead. This card gains ATK equal to half of the ATK of the equipped monster. While this card is face-up on the field, negate the effect of face-up Effect Monsters your opponent controls. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

 

Your Choice.

[Gogeta™]

I like it. Its a tad long but very effective overall. Great balance as well, I'll give this card an 8/10 :)

[Tormented]

I would edit lol but I can't cause as I said I rebooted it so image is gone....

[ragnarok1945]

"This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect." <---Goblin Elite Attack Force's attack siphoned, but fortunately this one knows it's weak in atk position, so changing it to def is a good thing, like Little Winguard's effect

 

from what I see though, the OCG errors are minimal, and the effect is quite good, I'll give this 9/10