Azwolop Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Yeah, still on the thing of making cards where you have the option of choosing the ATK, DEF or effects. So after creating Demonized Soul, where you could choose his ATK, i got requests on making one where you have the choice of DEF, and i got bored xD so here, Innocent Soul! When this card is successfully summoned to the field it's effect is activated. Flip a coin, if heads your opponent must choose the DEF of this card from one of the following choices. If tails you choose. The following effects are activated depending on the DEF that is chosen.• 1200 this card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)• 1800 each time a Spell card or Trap card is activated inflict 200 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points• 2600 the controller of this card must pay 500 Life Points at the end of each of their own battle phase's for this card to stay on the field. • 3500 this card is destroyed in 3 turns. Now i know this is probably definatly over powered, but im absolutly shattered and had too settle with the 1st effects that came too mind, i know there overpowered and i WILL think of better ones... after sleep xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Maybe destroyed in 2 turns instead of 3? But still, great card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Greatpic, a couple grammar problems, good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 You should make it Level 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 thanks man, i definatly knew about the grammar problems lol shall re-word when im awake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 I think it should be:When this card is successfully Summoned to the field, flip a coin, if heads your opponent must choose the DEF of this card from one of the following choices. If tails you choose. • 1200 this card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)• 1800 each time a Spell card or Trap card is activated inflict 200 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points• 2600 the controller of this card must pay 500 Life Points at the end of each of their own Battle Phase's for this card to stay on the field.• 3500 this card is destroyed during the 3rd End Phase after it is Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 hmm ok, Calculation needs to be caped, so does Card after Spell and Trap, Battle Phase, andd (all Summoning conditions must be capitalized) other then those my rating is 9/10 =) you did good! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 the calculation thing, i never did write that, i copied it off Marshmallon xD so i dont think its been spelt wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 the calculation thing' date=' i never did write that, i copied it off Marshmallon xD so i dont think its been spelt wrong[/quote'] Marshmallon? lol is that an actual yugioh card? lol, either way, thats fine with =) are you going to make the whole set or just that card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i've made one where u choose the ATK, and now the DEF and im thinking about making a set i dunno yet and how can yoo not know what marshmallon is!??!?! he's so cool xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i've made one where u choose the ATK' date=' and now the DEF and im thinking about making a set i dunno yet and how can yoo not know what marshmallon is!??!?! he's so cool xD[/quote'] lol I havent bought any new cards in almost a year =/fore warning for any new yugioh playersdont waster all your money on yugioh cards =/ lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 too true, i was in that phase, get money, buy cards, be skint lol not a good combination, anyway! moving on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Great card. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Some grammar problems, but nothing too serious. Good job! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 bump one last time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 8.5/10 nice job:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 Great card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 it is ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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