tsukiko Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 First of all in the title you spelled Heaven wrong Uppercase the first letter in each word for the title of each cardUppercase the type of the card"Genta" card you did the Gemini effect wrongLast card you say opponents Life PointsFor the token effect you did ATT instead of ATKWhen you say a name of a monster in a effect put quotations around the namesand theres more errors but I'm feeling lazy right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tsukiko Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 wow thnks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Your welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangketan Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 [7/10]-nice pics there! :)-instead of "comes into play" you should use "summoned" -spelling Errors Suggestions:-You should improve your OCG by checking the real card's OCG-Check your card for spelling errors before posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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