card poster

[crimsonWolf777]

this theard is to post cardsyou would people to see here are mine

majestic feather dragon

"Majestic Dragon" + "BlackFeather Dragon" + 1 non-Tuner monster

When your opponent gains Life Points or you take damage from of a card effect, inflict damage to your opponent equal to double the amount instead. During the battle between this attacking card and and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict Piercing Damage to your opponent. During the End Phase, return this card from the field to the Extra Deck, and Special Summon 1 "BlackFeather Dragon" from your Graveyard.

 

victory road

 

By halving your Life Points inflict damage to your opponenet equal to your current Life Points. Then you can special summon a monster from your Deck or Extra Deck and inflict damge to your opponent equal to it's ATK or DEF. If you do do one of the following:

*Send that monster to the graveyard during the End Phase.

*Halve your life point twice.

[ragnarok1945]

first one has no background, not that I care about that

 

"you take damage because of a card effect" should be FROM a card effect, not because of a card effect

 

piercing damage should be Piercing Damage. And as for the burn effect, I'm still unsure if doubling it is too much or not

 

7.5/10

[crimsonWolf777]

i fixed it and thanks for telling me im trying to make my cards sound realistic oh and heres another one i just made

This cards name is treated as any "Skull" or "Archfeind" monster. This card gains 300 ATK for each monster in your Graveyard with "Skull" or "Archfeind" in their name. You can remove from play as much cards as you want in your Graveyard to destroy cards on the field equal to the cards you removed from play.

yea i couldn't find any cartoon picture that that fitted it

[ragnarok1945]

3000 atk is too high for lv7 anyway, I'd make it lv8

 

And because of its atk boosting effect, lower the stats to 2400/2400 instead

 

plus nuking the field effect is OPed because you can use ANY card you want

 

4/10

[crimsonWolf777]

fixed again

[ragnarok1945]

that was only the stat fixing, the nuking the field effect I see no modifications at all

[crimsonWolf777]

this is a good card i hope

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Majestic Star Dragon" from your Extra Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Sin" monster on the field. By sending the top 3 cards from your deck to the graveyard this card can attack directly.

i think this deserves a 8 or higher and you never rated my victory road

[ragnarok1945]

the pic is good

 

deck and graveyard should be Deck and Graveyard

 

and all it has on the field for effect is attacking directly, I find this very boring for a lv10, give it another effect

 

6.8/10

[crimsonWolf777]

well its a sin monster most sin monsters only have 1 or 2 effects and for the level well sin monsters have all the same stats as its normail form only didderent pic and effect

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here i edited the card

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Majestic Star Dragon" from your Extra Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Sin" monster on the field. By sending the top 3 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard this card can attack directly. Once per turn, you can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

its the ultimate combo attack directly if they activate a spell or trap inflict the damage then attack boom 4300 points of damage enough to destroy any one with that amount of life points

[Jazin Kay]

Victory Road's art is used by an actual card.

 

But I forget the name of it.

[crimsonWolf777]

after glow of a miracle i now but that lookedliked like the only picture that suited it

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heres a new card i made today

"Blue-Eyes White Dragon" + "Red-Eyes Black Dragon"

This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending the Fusion Material Monsters from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard. This monster is also treated as a DARK-type monster. Once per turn, you can Special Summon a level 8 or 7 Dragon-type monster from your hand.

 

im going to make new cards based on megaman starforce if you want to see them go in pop culture and look for "megaman starforce cards"

[ragnarok1945]

the fusion has WAY too much stats. Even BEUD didn't have that high def

 

Also you didn't have to write Normal Summoned or Set. Fusion monsters can only be Special Summoned anyway

 

DARK is not a type, it's an attribute, which you made it LIGHT anyway

 

2/10

[crimsonWolf777]

Okay here apprentley no one understands that THEY CAN POST THERE CARDS HERE!!! so here's a recent card hope it gets higher then a 8

 

This card can only be destroyed by a Light-Attribute monster. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a Dark-Attribute monster. The equiped monster gains 1000 ATK and gains this cards effect.