Sákura Haruno Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 My second set :) hope you like it!Could you guys reply and give me some good ideas i really need it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 hmmm...rating the cards is going to be difficultall right lets start!you cards are all normal cards or "Vanilla". Most people dont like them because they arent very interesting, add some effects to them so people would actually read them. People justc are about the stats on normal monsters but they could care less sometimes. Effects, use them! Also, try finding a picture without a white background because it makes the card look very bland and dull. There are some OCG errors but you are new. OCG errors means that the grammar of your cards dont match with the grammar of real cards. If you have OCG errors people will have trouble understanding what you mean, easy way to fix them is look for a card in real life that has a similar effect and just copy that. Here is another One Piece set that was done absolutely perfect. Check it out for tips on cards etchttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-130659.html Overall-6/10+effort-Pic, OCG, etc...Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiscash Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Well, (for good reason,) people really don't like vanilla cards (monsters without effects).The pics are stretched badly.The cards are pretty overpowered (especially Zoro, with an effect and stats that make him a bit too strong for a 4-star monster)The Gum Gum Fruit turns the borderline overpowered Luffy into an extremely overpowered card.Chopper could be a Beast-Warrior, or even just a Beast honestly. They're not bad, per say, but you have a lot to learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OK thanks for the tips :) is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Rate my new cards not my old ones and reply about my new ones not my old ones unless you are going to compare the two and tell me if the new ones are better thanks :)And if anyone has any ideas how to make my cards better... please tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 you got better but there are some OCG errors but thats about it.you could try to make their effects somewhat interesting by making it similar to an ability they have in the anime or somethingOverall-8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 Thanks I like your Grimmjow chibi pic :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 haha thanks it took forever to find iti have a Ulquiorra one but i liked Grimmjow betterare you going to add more One Piece cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Ya. next I'll try to get the Luffy's enemies. working on it right now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 dont give them too powerful effects. try to make them balanced and have an interesting effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 you asked for them and here they are! Sorry but I couldn't find a good Kuro picture and I couldn't think of a good idea for an effect for Don Krieg :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 ah c'mon reply to my new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 ok there are some minor OCG errors but thats allsome of the effects are bland and kinda boringtry to make an interesting effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Ya. I'm starting to run out of effect ideas. Do you check out Naruto cards? I have a thread about them if you wanna check them out :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 yeah i looked at them but they suffer from the lack of effects and interesting effects like this setnot saying your bad but you should take your time and deal with each card with heart? yeah that sounded corny but whatever, its truejust take your time and think it through Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 I finally made another One Piece card :) hope you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 What happened to your chibi grimmjow? and will someone please rate my eneru card! :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 oh i found a cool Kenpachi pic so im going to use it a littlei still have the grimmjow pic but i got bored of it, my new pic moves :DEDIT:dang i forgot to rate, Eneru's effect is again not that great, just pretty weak for a 2500 ATK monster, etc... if you want to get a feel of effects check my cards, they are completely different but you will kind of understand what i mean by interesting effects, they are in my sig :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 some OCG errors, shud make the normal monsters effect monsters to make them more interestingand luffy is stronger than zoro, yeesh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Inferno, i made the ability from zaborg, the thunder monarch. And since Eneru is pretty much a thunder monarch... it just made sense to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 well yeah but that doesnt make it very unique does it? maybe im being a little to harsh, i dont know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 and where in the world did you find your sig pic? it's cool yet weird at the same time... :)True... but it's the easiest way not to make OCG mistakes. i like to use original and not so original effects know what i mean :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 true but you got to let your imagination run wild...not that wild XDoh i found the sig by typing in "bleach gifs" in google took me forever to find both my avatar and the sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 I can imagineit's from that stupid (but strangely funny at the same time) old spice commercial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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