Flute Charmer

[Alexis Rhodes]

[align=center]So i know the pic is overused and somone has probobly already used the same name but i decided to think of a really unusual effect to make it diffrent from the rest , enjoy :)

 

Credit : Jazin Kay - Image

 

 

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Effect :When this card is Summoned, destroy 2 monsters you control and Special Summon 2 monsters with 600 ATK or less from your Graveyard. When the Special Summoned monster(s) are destroyed, your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster with 600 ATK or less from their hand. If either you or your opponent cannot do this, that player loses 100 Life Points.

 

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[Squirrel Girl]

Pretty good card 8/10

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

The OCG is good. The second effect's OCG seems ok. I think so anyway.

 

The picture has been used in many other cards, but its nice none the less!

 

8/10 Basic overall, but if the second OCG is correct, then this should go to 9.5/10

 

Well done tho!

[Hyenn]

Ocg Fix: (I think this is the right one)

When a monsters Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed, your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster with 600 ATK or less from their hand. If you or your opponent cannot destroy or Summon the appropirate number of monsters, the respective player looses 1000 Lifepoints.

(changed 100 to 1000, I mean 100 LP is basically equal to 0, so I thought it was accidentally 100 instead of 1000).

Decent card, I have to say though I wasn't impressed that much, probabbly this is just due to personal preference, though.

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

Ocg Fix: (I think this is the right one)

When the monsters Special Summoned by this effect are destroyed' date=' your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster with 600 ATK or less from their hand. If you or your opponent cannot destroy or Summon the appropirate number of monsters, the respective player looses 1000 Lifepoints.

(changed 100 to 1000, I mean 100 LP is basically equal to 0, so I thought it was accidentally 100 instead of 1000).

Decent card, I have to say though I wasn't impressed that much, probabbly this is just due to personal preference, though.

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You didn't really need to fix the OCG, because its basically the same, except you put the words in different orders.

 

I agree, tho, change it to 500 or 1000

[Hyenn]

Yugioh effects never say such a thing like if you cannot do this. They would add If you cannot do ... then. And "the Special Summoned" monsters can be argued and misunderstood so yes it was neccesary. For instance, that means any monster that was SP summoned not just the ones by this effect.

[Cloister]

(changed 100 to 1000' date=' I mean 100 LP is basically equal to 0, so I thought it was accidentally 100 instead of 1000).

Decent card, I have to say though I wasn't impressed that much, probabbly this is just due to personal preference, though.

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I think the OCG you gave was better, but I am not sure. Think the already existing is not incorrect though.

But the 1000 LP loss is too much in this case, maybe 500, at the most, since your opponent will have more use of this effect than you would, unless you are planning a Synchro/Tribute/Fusion Summon.

[jayjack]

Not to question your OCG, but just a suggested effect:

When this card is Summoned, you can select and destroy 2 monsters you control. Afterward, Special Summon up to 2 monsters with 600 ATK or less from your Graveyard. When the Special Summoned monster(s) are destroyed, your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster with 600 ATK or less from their hand. If either you or your opponent cannot do this, that player loses 100 Life Points.

 

Though changing the effect largely, i feel the last part is pointless. 100 points is a very small amount.

Dunno if this changes the concept of your idea, but just suggesting, dun kill the messenger ^^

9/10 good card!

[Cloister]

I don't see it change it that much. but then your opponent would be give to much advantage and you would destroy monsters for no gain.

[jayjack]

I don't see it change it that much. but then your opponent would be give to much advantage and you would destroy monsters for no gain.

Well it wasn't suppose to change the effect that much. When the card is summoned, it should be an optional effect. The summoning monsters are optional choice of how many monsters summoned. And removed that last part.

[Cloister]

No, you can only Summon 2, not 1 or 0. But if you have none, of course you can't Summon them then.

[ragnarok1945]

the only thing is for this effect "If either you or your opponent cannot do this, that player loses 100 Life Points."

 

make the burn bigger, 100 LP is nothing, make it 1000 instead

 

9/10

[Alexis Rhodes]

Sorry guys it was supposed to be 1000 not 100

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

Change it to 500. 1000 is a bit too much

[ragnarok1945]

Sorry guys it was supposed to be 1000 not 100

 

fine, then NOW I can raise my rate to 9.5/10