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Alluria, the Goddess of Control [JP]

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Since I am barely ever active on YCM anymore, I figured that I'd just give a gift to the community of members who are still actively making cards for fun.

 

I have had the Advanced Gemini Archetype as a WIP (Work in Progress) for the longest time now, and I've never actually gotten time to actually continue it (more like I was lazy, but whatever). It's probably even like a year old or something.

 

Anyways, the first card of the set is below. The PSD of the template is also below (just click the card), so you can take it, and do whatever you wish. Make your own cards from the template or idea, etc. If you're going to use all or part of my PSD, I would like to ask for you to credit me, but if you don't, I can't stop you. But you're just risking lots of flamers on your part for stealing and whatnot, since everybody pretty much knows who I am.

 

Yes, the ATK/DEF look like crap. I don't have the time to fix it. Do it yourself. Not hard.

 

Template removed, since I am offering it as a service in my Shoppe now.

 

I have also written a lot of cards for the set; you can see other cards I have already written out here: Pastebin.

 

Feel free to design those cards yourself if you want to. I don't care. If you do use the effects, credit me. If you want me to post them in this thread, tell me.

 

Anyways, enough explaining the random stuff, here's the Advanced Gemini Archetype rulings and whatnot:

 

[spoiler=Advanced Gemini Archetype]Set Name: Gemini Rebirth (GMRB)

 

This archetype mainly specializes in turning Normal Monsters into a Gemini Monsters, while also giving them effects that aid the owner of the original Advanced Gemini Monster. They can be done towards any Normal Monster on the field, regardless of who controls it.

 

While Gemini Monster effects in themselves are slightly overpowered, the fact that those effects require a Gemini Summon to be activated is commonly overlooked. These Advanced Gemini Monsters simply compliment that fact. (Normal Summoning twice to activate their effects.)

 

Since Advanced Gemini Monsters are, well, advanced, they are naturally unaffected by the influence of control-changing cards.

 

Advanced Gemini Monsters are considered Gemini Monsters, and thus, are still considered Normal/Effect Monsters (depending on if they have been Gemini Summoned yet).

 

Normal, Advanced, and Custom OCG have been used in this archetype. It is your job to find where it has been used, and learn and build upon it.

 

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[spoiler=Effect:]Alluria, the Goddess of Control

LIGHT Fairy Advanced Gemini Monster, Level 4

ATK 800/DEF 1800

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. You can Gemini Summon this card to have it be treated as an Advanced Gemini Monster with this effect:

● Control of this card cannot switch. When this card is Gemini Summoned, place 1 Control Counter on 1 Normal Monster on the field (max. 1). During your End Phase, you can remove 1 Control Counter from 1 monster on the field to Normal Summon that monster to your side of the field and have it be treated as a Gemini Monster with this effect:

● If the original ATK of this monster is below 2000, this card gains 1000 ATK while "Alluria, the Goddess of Control" is face-up on the field. If the original ATK of this monster is above 2000, this card can attack your opponent directly while "Alluria, the Goddess of Control" is face-up on the field. The damage this card inflicts to your opponent is halved.

 

Oh, and by the way, if you say that I have any OCG errors, I will kill you. Read the Advanced Gemini Archetype rulings before saying anything.

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Why do you write in such a light color... just write it in black, i hate having to highlight to read.

Anyway, love the concept. Really helps out vanilla

Dunno if it's something new, but to tell you the truth, the card doesn't look like a YGO card. At all.

Anywho, great work, OCG, etc. Can't see any flaws to this card except the "Gemini Summon" and "Advance Gemini Monster" thing. Considering it's already an Advance Gemini monster, why not just call it an Effect monster. Though the Gemini Summon thing i get, it doesn't make sense not to just Special Summon it like a Gemini Normal Summoning itself on the field. Why make things complicated >_>

Well, I rate this card 9.5/10 Nicely Done ^^

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I don't know how much a completly new design, type and OCG phrases can be considered realistic, but if I skip over this: It is great, except I don't think anyone really uses normal monster so I suppose it is used to grab Geminis/Advanced Geminis, which can make it pretty weak.

Anyway really good.

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wait...so you have to normal summon it the first time, then normal summon it again to gain it's Gemini effect, and then you Normal Summon it again to gain it's Advanced Gemini effect?

If it is it should have a pretty powerful effect because you have to sacrifice summoning another monster to have 1 monster gain an extra efect

10/10

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wait...so you have to normal summon it the first time' date=' then normal summon it again to gain it's Gemini effect, and then you Normal Summon it again to gain it's Advanced Gemini effect?

If it is it should have a pretty powerful effect because you have to sacrifice summoning another monster to have 1 monster gain an extra efect

10/10

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If I undestood right and understood you too, right, then no: He has to summon Alluria, then to gain its effect summon her again, then summon the monster you take control over. But once again I have kind of hard time to understand what exactly you said so you might have understood well and I just misunderstood you.

But yeah 3 Normal Summons are wasted to activate a not so strong effect with very limited target pool. But the way it was designed is great.

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you lost me at "summon the monster you take control over"

what i was trying to say was do you have to summon the same monster like a Gemini but summon 1 more time?

 

The monster you take from your opponent is summoned during the take-over (so when you put it on your side of the field, you Normal Summon it) but once you have it on your field it already has it's Gemini effect, if I am right.

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gah! too confusing. it made more sense with what i said (normal summon same monster 3 times' date=' DONE)

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Wait I'm confused now. Gemini Summon is a Normal Summon? Wtf? Man is this getting confusing

Plus you only need to summon it once, what are you talking about? Its summoned, gets control counter places it on monster and monster becomes Gemini monster with an effect. But you considering you didn't specify if it's treated as a normal or effect monster, it'd be treated as an effect monster... i think..

You know what, I think i'll change my rate to 8.5/10 since this is getting a lot more confusing then it needs to be.

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gah! too confusing. it made more sense with what i said (normal summon same monster 3 times' date=' DONE)

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Wait I'm confused now. Gemini Summon is a Normal Summon? Wtf? Man is this getting confusing

Plus you only need to summon it once, what are you talking about? Its summoned, gets control counter places it on monster and monster becomes Gemini monster with an effect. But you considering you didn't specify if it's treated as a normal or effect monster, it'd be treated as an effect monster... i think..

You know what, I think i'll change my rate to 8.5/10 since this is getting a lot more confusing then it needs to be.

hey dont do that (change the rating i mean)

well you summon the Gemini monster (1st Summon), normal summon to gain its effect or its just a normal monster (2nd summon), and i think to Advance Gemini summon you have to normal summon the already summoned Gemini monster with its effect to gain a greater effect (3rd summon)?

 

im not sure if im right or not but whatever...it boggles the mind >__<

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You guys are confusing yourselves. It's not that difficult. Hyenn understood the gist of it already.

 

You guys need to understand the basic concepts of normal Gemini monsters in order to understand the concept of my Advanced Gemini Monsters.

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gemini_Summon

 

Might want to review that.

 

A Gemini Summon is still considered a Normal Summon.

 

It also may be in your best interest to look at the other cards I have written out, as they will give you a better idea.

 

Being underpowered is much more better than being overpowered, and in the case of this card, it's not meant to be too overpowered. Remember, they're different than normal Gemini monsters; they compliment them.

 

On a side note: Wow. People are actually complaining about my font colour. Wow.

 

 

And if you guys didn't notice, you only need to Gemini Summon it once. Re-read the card lore. It's basically the same as how you would Gemini Summon a normal Gemini Monster.

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You guys are confusing yourselves. It's not that difficult. Hyenn understood the gist of it already.

 

You guys need to understand the basic concepts of normal Gemini monsters in order to understand the concept of my Advanced Gemini Monsters.

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gemini_Summon

 

Might want to review that.

 

A Gemini Summon is still considered a Normal Summon.

 

It also may be in your best interest to look at the other cards I have written out' date=' as they will give you a better idea.

 

Being underpowered is much more better than being overpowered, and in the case of this card, it's not meant to be too overpowered. Remember, they're different than normal Gemini monsters; they compliment them.

 

On a side note: Wow. People are actually complaining about my font colour. Wow.

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Okay lets see... I'm gonna go out and search for all your posts and stuff.. then come up with an idea of what this card might be about.

Let's just review; Gemini is a normal monster with an effect; Advance Gemini monster is a normal monster with an effect that gives normal monsters an effect. I understood that before. Now what is the point of going out and creating this entire new rule of Gemini Summon when you can simply write out Normal Summon.

 

On a side note: I dun complain, I explain.

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"It just sounds better."

 

Now stop complaining. It falls under Custom OCG. Sheesh =|.

 

Fine (Not a fan of custom ocg)

well i guess 9/10 is my final rating

Good card. GREAT concept. But sometimes you go overboard (Especially that part where you lure noobs to use "custom card template" which make cards "Beautiful". Not to complain, of course.)

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