Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Er, I'm not sure how many cards I'm allowed to post a day, but having just made this card, which I think is better than my first, I thought I should post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 card not popping up buddy. There's no limit to how many cards you can post, just don't spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Strange...it's showing on mine, I can't imagine why it wouldn't pop up on yours... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyenn Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OCG: Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200 for every LIGHT monster on the field.Well pretty generic, but it is not OP!, being your first card it is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 oh now its popping up. Oh... it's a bland effect. Here's a starter tip, your cards should always have 2 or more effects. Or 1 really long effect. No one likes a bland pointless effect.Well balanced. OCG needs some work. Looks like someone beat me to the OCG fix8/10 since you're new. Not a bad beginning. Most new people post pokemon cards and crap like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Okay, I am going to sound horribly noobish with this, but I have to ask...What is the OCG? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OCG=Original Card Grammarbasically the grammar of real YuGiOh Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Ah, okay...thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Not noobish at all, most new people don't.OCG = Original Card GrammarWhich means, the correct Lore that matches real YGO cards. For instance, in real YGO cards, light is always all captial; LIGHT. It doesn't change the effect, but looks more professional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 same exact thing i said but more in-depthtoo lazy to write it out now...too depressed.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 If i were u I would spiff it up a bit, it's effect may make it a powerful card but it needs more phazzaz, the OCG has already been corrected.9/10 Great for noobsI'm a 3-star now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 Light should be LIGHT (since it's an attribute) too boring of an effect for just boosting atk, so I'll give this 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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