Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Okay, I tried to do a bit better on this one, I'm not sure if the effect is creative enough or anything, I was trying to simulate using the parts from the monster Tributed to rebuild this one.But here it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinobu194 Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Not bad, maybe a little too strong for level 7 but the effect would come in handy. Also it would be Machine not Robotic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OCG fix: Once per Match, when this card is destroyed in battle, you may tribute 1 Machine type monster which is level 7 or higher on your side of the Field, to Special Summon this card to the Field in face-up attack position. Jope that helps! 7/10 Ok card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OCG fixed, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 No problem. Do you need me to rate some more in this set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 er, I haven't got a set going yet, but if you could rate some of my either attempts I'd be thankful :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Will do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 I'd take out the level 7 part and just have it as Machine-type monster. Other than that, I like this card 8/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Match should be Duel found other errors. Pic is good and effect is good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Match should be Duel found other errors. Pic is good and effect is good 7/10 It is, is it?That was the only bit I didn't know what to put. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Ocg fixOnce per Duel, when this card is destroyed by battle, you can tribute 1 Level 7 or higher Machine-Type monster to Special Summon this card to the Field in face-up attack position. This is the best ocg I can come up with Fix it and I give you 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OCG fix: Once per Match' date=' when this card is destroyed in battle, you may tribute 1 Machine type monster which is level 7 or higher on your side of the Field, to Special Summon this card to the Field in face-up attack position.[/i'] Jope that helps! 7/10 Ok card There's no Once per Match. YGO Cards have no effect on matches, just the current duel. (With the exception of illegal Match Winner cards like Ulevo) Not a bad card to say the least. Though tributing a lvl7 is kinda harsh. I suggest you remove that. You have some ocg errors. Correct OCG fix:When this card is destroyed by battle, one time only, you can Tribute 1 Level 7 or higher Machine-Type monster to Special Summon this card in Face-Up Attack Position. (Btw, that "one time only" part i got from destiny hero dasher) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Your ocg is wrong jayjack. At least mine is correct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 OCG fixed, thanks for the help haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Field should be field, forget that but thanks for thanking me ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 That's one of the best cards I've seen from a noob. ATK seems a bit high,but other than that...8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 nairb27 you are a noob card maker haha ^_^ or a noviceI am a great or Epic card maker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 nairb27 you are a noob card maker haha ^_^ or a noviceI am a great or Epic card maker What about me? (Say amazing ^^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 You are a Great or awesome I haven't seen many of your cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 You are a Great or awesome I haven't seen many of your cards I'm making cards, just need epic pics, then I'll be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Your ocg is wrong jayjack. At least mine is correct Dun start a fight with me cause you'll lose o_oOnce per Duel Not a correct ocg phrase. I've never seen it on a real card before. My version is the same as Destiny Hero Dasher.' date=' when this card is destroyed by battle, you can tribute 1 Level 7 or higher Machine-Type monster to Special Summon this card[b'] to the Field[/b] This is unnecessary since Special Summon generally summons to your field. in face-up attack positionAttack Position. Any questions?Sorry, I just dun like to be judged :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Yea but it's not incorrect, and once per duel is the correct ocg, I know more than all you Level 4 members and below haha just joking not all but many, especially you, mine ocg correction is the most correct of all that have posted in this thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Yea but it's not incorrect' date=' and once per duel is the correct ocg, I know more than all you Level 4 members and below haha just joking not all but many, especially you, mine ocg correction is the most correct of all that have posted in this thread[/quote'] dun fool yourself. And dun flame and make these pointless posts saying your better then everyone. It's spamming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 I dont say I was better than Everyone I just say I am better than many cause they sux. I on the other hand have almost never have any ocg corrections. I was good at making cards when I started making cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 it's reasonable for a new member shame it has no effect while on the field, if you gave it one it'd be much better8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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