E.N.D. [The New Destiny Board] Need OCG Help

[Gogeta™]

[align=center]It was hard trying to write theses effects since there nothing really like this so you might see some major OCG errors. This is basically a new way to get a victory which involves getting cards onto your opponents side of the field.

 

The pics aren't that great but live with it ;)

 

 

Card Lore

 

This activation of this card cannot be negated. During your opponent's Standby Phase Select 3 Spell Cards from your Deck (one of the selected Spell Cards must be "Letter E", "Letter N", or "Letter D"). Your opponent must randomly select 1 of the 3 cards. Activate the following effects based on the results.

*"Letter E": selected card face-up in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone.

*"Letter N": Place the selected card in your opponent's hand.

*"Letter D": Place the selected card on the bottom your opponent's Deck.

 

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[ragnarok1945]

ok, a little bit better to play compared to the original destiny board

 

"Apply the appropriate effect if the card is one of the following." <---should be "Activate the following effects based on the results"

 

quicker than the original destiny board. Personally though, I had hoped you'd make one to take up all 11 slots, so all the monster, spell/trap, and field spell would be filled.

 

THEN you can finally write the destiny board message "THIS IS SPARTA!"

 

8/10

[Gogeta™]

ok' date=' a little bit better to play compared to the original destiny board

 

"Apply the appropriate effect if the card is one of the following." <---should be "Activate the following effects based on the results"

 

quicker than the original destiny board. Personally though, [b']I had hoped you'd make one to take up all 11 slots, so all the monster, spell/trap, and field spell would be filled.

 

THEN you can finally write the destiny board message "THIS IS SPARTA!"[/b]

 

8/10

 

Thanks :)

 

I had hoped you'd make one to take up all 11 slots, so all the monster, spell/trap, and field spell would be filled.

 

THEN you can finally write the destiny board message "THIS IS SPARTA!"

 

Lol that'd be awesome!

[Cloister]

Pretty cool idea, though I would make "E.N.D" the kill card, but being really hard to achive victory through.

[Hyenn]

Ok, I also have very hard time understanding but, basically this is almost impossible to bring out:

OK first in E you can't refer to the user of END as you cause you is the current controller of the card, (in other words, if A activates END and gets E on B's field the only who can win the game by its effects is B.)

So use this OCG:

While the original owner of this card has E.N.D. face up on his side of the field, and his/her opponent has N. and D. face up on the field, the original owner of this card wins.

Also you do get that if your opponent decides not to flip it face up (and why the hell would he?) you almost can't do a thing to make him flip it face up (activate it).

In N:

Sorry but: "Place Letter D 3 cards down from your deck" is nonsense, I will treat it like there is a commas between D and 3 which would have a meaning:

Then use this OCG:

When this card is put in your hand by the effect of E.N.D., activate one of the following effects:

-Send this card and the top 3 cards of your deck to the graveyard.

-Place this card face up on your side of the field na treat it as a Continous Spell Card with the following effect: This card cannot be destroyed.

Note: Once again if A activates E.N.D and adds N to B's hand, then B will get to choose and just easily dump it down.

In D:

OCG:

If you add this card to your hand, put it face up on the field. While this card is in your deck it cannot be the target of any effect except the effect of E.N.D.

Note: You do get it that it will take probbably ages before the opponent draws it?

Conclusion, as I can see this card is either unplayable or you made a big mistake when you forgot that "you" refers to the current controller/holder of the card so if you give it to him and the card says "you" does something, then that "you" is the player it was given to it, so basically, if my enemy uses these cards, I just don't flip E face-up, I choose N's first effect, so I loose the top 3 cards of my deck, but N goes to the grave, and I have good chances of not even drawing D.

Anyway I think you should define the constant "you" with original owner and current controller instead, cause I think right now they doesn't mean what you wanted them to mean. (you is always the current controller aka the one who has it in his hand/deck/field/grave/rfp)

 

EDIT/P.S: Since others seem to be ignoring this problem, I might be wrong, so judge on your own wether you think I am right or not.

[ChaosIncarn]

Well Tom, I think this is a lot more achievable than Destiny Board ever was, and a little more fun if you ask me. With Ragna's OCG fix, I'd say it's a darn spiffy set. I just said spiffy...[facepalm]

 

8/10 From me. I'm half tempted to do some artwork for the letters >_>

[Cloister]

Yeah, but it seems he has made the pics himself so I think they work good as they are.

 

There are some errors, but not that many, so I don't think I will fix it unless you want. There are already fixes, but not that good fixes, still they have some errors...

[Brinolovania]

I'm not good with OCG,so I'll just rate it. Nice,balanced...9/10

[Gogeta™]

I made some changes to the effects so its makes more sense.

[Zen-Psi]

Destiny board,awww nope but still just as good,great work

 

8/10

[Cloister]

I made some changes to the effects so its makes more sense.

 

If you want, I can fix OCG. But tomorrow. Just PM me the effects and I'll gladly fix 'em ^^