My first cards posted: Hope and Despair

[SACManFever]

Finally I'm starting to post my cards to this site! Here are the first two:

 

 

HOPE: "Activate only when you have less than 3000 Life Points. When this card resolves, shuffle this card into your deck, then draw 4 cards. If "Hope" is among the drawn cards, remove it from play and add the rest of the cards to your hand; otherwise discard all cards drawn by this effect and draw 1 card."

 

DESPAIR: "Pay 4000 Life Points. Destroy all other cards on the field and in each player's hand. While this card remains face-up on the field, the hand limit for both players becomes 0."

 

I don't think these two cards could have been more opposite each other. Any feedback will be appreciated (as long as it's constructive). Thanks!

[jayjack]

A few ocg errors. I would point them out but I think someone *Aquamaster* would come and yell at me. The first card seems balanced. The 2nd is OP. having 0 hand is way too op, even for 4k cost. Completely changes game.

9/10 cause you're new

Great job, bro!

[ragnarok1945]

2nd pic is on the blurry end

 

2nd card seems it would do well with that Mechanical Hound card (I think that was the name of the card, the only who's effects only work when you have no cards in your hand)

 

though 4000 LP isn't enough of a cost for dropping the hand limit to 0

 

7/10

[SACManFever]

Sometimes pictures just come out blurry. (I was disappointed by that too.) If there's a way to fix that problem for the future, please let me know. And I think you're right, it is Mechanical Hound you're thinking of, but just imagine "Despair" in an Infernity deck...

 

"Despair" is a bit OP, I suppose. Perhaps the hand limit part should be removed? (But if you want to see it be insanely OP, just remove the 4000 LP cost! :lol:)

 

As to OCG errors, I'd like to know what errors there were so I don't become too much of a repeat offender.

 

P.S. Glad you liked my cards! Hopefully the next ones will be better!

[jayjack]

Sometimes pictures just come out blurry. (I was disappointed by that too.) If there's a way to fix that problem for the future' date=' please let me know. And I think you're right, it is Mechanical Hound you're thinking of, but just imagine "Despair" in an Infernity deck...

 

"Despair" is a bit OP, I suppose. Perhaps the hand limit part should be removed? (But if you want to see it be insanely OP, just remove the 4000 LP cost! :lol:)

 

As to OCG errors, I'd like to know what errors there were so I don't become too much of a repeat offender.

 

P.S. Glad you liked my cards! Hopefully the next ones will be better!

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I prefer to upload the pics in tinypic and just paste url onto card. This makes the image very clear. But I think rag means the 2nd one. It's either too small of a pic or just blurry like that. The first 1 is stretched, you need to edit it to fit on card by using Photoshop/etc.