Nagato the Battle Mech

[Sessha Nagato]

I think I'll be making a series of 'Mechs'

But anyway, I am not sure about this card, so ratings and critiques will be appreciated :)

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

OCG:

 

Your improving

 

Each time this card destroys a monster in battle, increase this card's ATK by 200 points and decrease the DEF by 200 points.

[Sessha Nagato]

Haha thanks, OCG corrected

[jayjack]

Not bad. I see no OCG errors. Though bland effect. 8.7/10 Nicely done

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

Haha thanks' date=' OCG corrected

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lol. I could rate your cards all day. :D

[ragnarok1945]

boring for just atk and def changes

 

give it another effect for it to do something else and you'll be good

 

8/10

[Sessha Nagato]

Well, I don't think it would make for a great deck if every effect was insane XD that's why I make some of them slightly less creative

[RedRaptor10]

its a nice card. and a boring card does not mean it's a bad card. 9/10

[Neo-MasterX]

1 - NAME is OK

2 - Star Amount is OK

3 - PIC could be better but its OK

4 - EFFECT is too short

5 - ATK and DEF points are OK

RATING is 7/10

[StevenBray]

OCG: "When this card destroys a monster by battle, increase this card's ATK by 200 and decrease its DEF by 200" - Each time isn't necessary in this case, and you don't mentions 'points' anymore.

 

Pic and name are good, and the card seems balanced and effective - and short effects aren't bad if their useful.

 

Rating: 7/10 - it's a good card, but good isn't great.

 

Note: If you're gonna make a set, you'll need to have varied card effects to keep it interesting.

[Sessha Nagato]

Well, it's not like the actual company makes every card with a mad effect. Like I said, I think it's more realistic if some of the cards do have interesting effects, but not all.