~The Game~ Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 This has most likely been done before, oh, and ty ProjectHybrid on DeviantArt for the Art. Assuming lore isn't needed, these are small, if so, let me know. Like I said, my first cards. Constructive Criticism please,oh, and OCG help! Thanks....D:.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 there's plenty of capitalization errors on the text Biome, Cave, Grauchi and Nalrek all have WAY too bland effects, give them more 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Game~ Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 I thought it was plenty, Wit all the trap and spell cards. More effects would be OP no? And, cap errors... hmm... specify? ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
15GreenawaltA Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 They wont be OPED if you give them some sort of drawback effect, I like the set, but the pics are blurry.8/10 Errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 graveyard should be Graveyard end of your turn should be End Phase summon should be Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Game~ Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 They wont be OPED if you give them some sort of drawback effect' date=' I like the set, but the pics are blurry.8/10 Errors[/quote']They are painted I assume, got them off deviantart. only difference is they are strectched.graveyard should be Graveyard end of your turn should be End Phase summon should be Summon thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 OCG is off, and the cards are very underpowered. Not horrible, just...very meh. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Game~ Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 OCG is off' date=' and the cards are very underpowered. Not horrible, just...very meh. 5/10.[/quote'] Thanks for being honest. I wanted them to be... well, realistic, and I felt they were. But, I'll try and make them more...... less meh next time xD Thanks for the help, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 very nice setthere are some OCG errors now and then but i could care less unless it is absolutely horribleYou should make it say Behemoth-then the name instead of name-Behemoth because that sounds better. But maybe its just me...i dont know Overall-8/10+i have no idea, pics?-eh, too bored right now to do... if you made more i might be able to rate higher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Game~ Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 very nice setthere are some OCG errors now and then but i could care less unless it is absolutely horribleYou should make it say Behemoth-then the name instead of name-Behemoth because that sounds better. But maybe its just me...i dont know Overall-8/10+i have no idea' date=' pics?-eh, too bored right now to do... if you made more i might be able to rate higher[/quote'] I thought -Behemoth sounded better, but I did consider the other way. ;D Anyway, overall, guess I didn't do too bad. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark014 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 it is a BEHEMOTH DECK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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