Infinitus Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 [align=center]∞Demonic Slave Master∞ Lore:1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more Non-Tuner MonstersOnce per turn, you can release 1 monster from your Graveyard to take control of a face up monster your opponent controls. When this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's Effect, you can tribute 1 monster you control to negate the effect. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Meh. Probably not my best. I'll let you guys decide that. Provided my threads were noticed enough for you guys to know my best. T_T[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 I think tribute and opponent should be capitalized.. overall good card, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 I was pretty unsure about tribute, but I don't think opponent is capatalized. I'll have to check that. EDIT: I just checked. Turns out, neither are capitalized. Still, thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 tribute should be Tribute "you can remove 1 monster from your Graveyard" <---change remove to release "You can tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls." <---this you should limit to only once per turn 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 I agree with limiting the monster snatch to only once per turn. Otherwise, this card is mucho overpowered. The OCG errors have already been pointed out, and yeah, tribute should be capitalized. 7/10 (8/10 with fixes) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 It is once per turn. It says once per turn in the effect. I just checked. Also, I'll change remove to release shortly. EDIT: Oh, you meant the destroy S & T's. I suppose that would be a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 not bad at all 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 tribute should be Tribute "you can remove 1 monster from your Graveyard" <---change remove to release "You can tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls." <---this you should limit to only once per turn 8.5/10 No no no no no! How can you tribute/release a monster in your graveyard? Just not possible. Instead it's just outright RFPing it. That correction doesn't make sense. See, because Release is the new OCG (Official/Japanese Card Game) Text for Tribute, while as far as I know Tribute is the same in the TCG. Secondly, why should it be once per turn? You're -1 yourself for what gain? Even in Turbo decks you're not pulling enough for it to be once per turn. So not only did your suggestion fail at OCG correction, you also kinda ruined an already seriously confused card. *claps* Feel proud of yourself, for whatever its worth. .-. As for this card, the blatant retarded suggestions that were made, it's naturally underpowered for the most part since the level required is much higher than whats normally used (Mist Wurm is the only current staple). Its effect probably won't work much. The sole purpose of this card would be for the first effect, which is ohoho so broken .-." Not sure what you were going for but it's a mishmash of randomness. Recollect your ideas and rework the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 tribute should be Tribute "you can remove 1 monster from your Graveyard" <---change remove to release "You can tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls." <---this you should limit to only once per turn 8.5/10 No no no no no! How can you tribute/release a monster in your graveyard? Just not possible. Instead it's just outright RFPing it. That correction doesn't make sense. See' date=' because Release is the new OCG (Official/Japanese Card Game) Text for Tribute, while as far as I know Tribute is the same in the TCG. Secondly, why should it be once per turn? You're -1 yourself for what gain? Even in Turbo decks you're not pulling enough for it to be once per turn. So not only did your suggestion fail at OCG correction, you also kinda ruined an already seriously confused card. *claps* Feel proud of yourself, for whatever its worth. .-. As for this card, the blatant retarded suggestions that were made, it's naturally underpowered for the most part since the level required is much higher than whats normally used (Mist Wurm is the only current staple). Its effect probably won't work much. The sole purpose of this card would be for the first effect, which is ohoho so broken .-." Not sure what you were going for but it's a mishmash of randomness. Recollect your ideas and rework the card.[/quote'] Eh. Probably the best idea. I was originally thinking snatch n' sync, and if something negated, I could get rid of the synchro and start over. That, and if the monsters builded up, I could get rid of the backrow to make sure my attacks go unchallenged. However, you're probably right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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