Squirrel Girl Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 The card: Lore:1 Machine-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsterWhen this card is Summoned, destroy all Machine-Type monster on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, if this card would be attacked while in Attack Position, you can negate the attack and destroy that card. This effect cannot be Negated. Once per turn, if a Machine-Type monster your opponent controls would activate it's effect, you can pay 800 Life Points to negate the effect and destroy that card. When this card is destroyed, you can pay 500 life Points to return this card to the Extra Deck instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Image credit Jazin Kay Rate and comment but not give me advice how I can make this card better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tronta Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 your grammar is awful. missing plurals and conjugations everywhere. fix ocg. that aside, i like the card. it would probably make dna surgery playable. is there any reason why it's level 7? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 point out the ocg errors and its no reason it's Level 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 change it's effect to its effect (remember, it's = it is) a shame this seems to excel only against other machine decks though 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 Thanks rag More Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tronta Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 a synchros level should have meaning, or at least the creator should have some tuners or a combination in mind. i can see at least 2 instances without really looking where the word "monster" should be "Monsters" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRaptor10 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 i like the pic. and i think life points should be Life Points. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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