rushraptor Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 OCG is shaky. Basic pictures. I won't fix them all, but start all you sentences with capitals and finish them with a full stop.3.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushraptor Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 i know but im lazy to things like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 i know but im lazy to things like that That costs nothing to press shift plus the letter. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushraptor Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 ah well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 ah well lol. But you could be turned into an good card maker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 4/10 because of the pics, bad ocg and grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushraptor Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 you think i got some ideas but can never find the pics that give them justice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted March 22, 2010 Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushraptor Posted March 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2010 fair enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye Pierce Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Pics are poor, OCG is meh,4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 -Pics could be better (include backgrounds, several such as "Mario" are pixellated)-Lots and lots of OCG errors, for example:normal summoned= Normal SummonedWhen quoting a Card Name, add quotation marks around it, eg. "Fire Flower"graveyard= Graveyard-"Bowser's Castle" with "Bowser" is overpowered.- "Bowser" with "Mario" is way overpowered. If one is destroyed, you can simply Summon the other from the graveyard, leading to an ongoing cycle. - Types could be better. Koopas do not have Dragon qualities, IMO Yoshi would be better as a Dinosaur-Type, and why is Peach and Daisy a Spellcaster-Type?- I cannot read the long effects that Peach and Daisy have. If you can post the Lore for them separately, that would help.- "Parakoopa LV9" is redundant. LVs are only needed when there is a group of other relevant monsters with "LV" in their names. Also, monsters with LVs under 4 usually cannot be Summoned except by Tributing one with a Level lower than it. Overall, it does need work. They are not the worst Set i've seen, but there is not enough thought and effort put into these at all. Please read what I and others have commented on, and make those adjustments. 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushraptor Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 1 the grammer has been said already 2 i took the bowser mario cycle from the moon and sun dragon`s3 koopas seem more dragon than anything4 i forgot bout dinosaur being a type5 Parakoopa lv9 wasnt supossed to have para in its name thought i got rid of that and i said lv 9 cause of winged kuriboh lv9 the red armor so i guessed it fitted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 OCG is shaky. Basic pictures. I won't fix them all' date=' but start all you sentences with capitals and finish them with a full stop.3.6/10[/quote'] And put them in a spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 You should change the title -_-SOme pics blurry and most need BGOCG needs work (Grammer too)I'm lazy too fix stiff that has alot of cards4.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Seriously. The worst part for me was that the pics were gawdawful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 1 the grammer has been said already 2 i took the bowser mario cycle from the moon and sun dragon`s3 koopas seem more dragon than anything4 i forgot bout dinosaur being a type5 Parakoopa lv9 wasnt supossed to have para in its name thought i got rid of that and i said lv 9 cause of winged kuriboh lv9 the red armor so i guessed it fitted 1. Fair enough. As long as you understand what you need to change.2. But how does the effect of Moon and Sun Dragon compare with the abilities and powers of Mario and Bowser? I don't quite understand your way of thinking with that.3. So, you do not see how they are more similar to Turtles (reptile) with their ability to withdraw in their shell? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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