The Evolution of Daidedia [Vanilla Story]

[DARKPLANT RISING]

At first, Daidedia is a lone orphaned dragon left to die near the volcanoes of the Crimson World, a part of the Duel Monsters Universe surrounded by desolate volcanoes and wastelands. However, things turn very different for him afterwards...

 

[spoiler=As a child]

 

 

[spoiler=After Mature]

 

 

[spoiler=His Enemy]

 

 

[spoiler=As Ruler]

 

 

[spoiler=His Former Rebellion]

 

 

 

 

How do you think? And yes, I know that 3200 ATK on a vanilla is believed by some to be bad. So what?A bad-effect-less effect monster with higher ATK is there.

[LourDeath]

these are cool ^.^

[DARKPLANT RISING]

thx ^^

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[DARKPLANT RISING]

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[Hyenn]

Okay, well rather than unbalanced, I think that having more than 3200 ATK as a normal lv7+ monster is against the unwritten rules, and Konami decided not to do that.

However it makes it in no way unbalanced, in my eyes, at least.

The story seems well made, well not too interesting, but this isn't exactly a novel.

I think it would be far better if there were effect monsters and some vanillas that connect them with a story. (Ah, the first two don't appear for me, so I can't speak about them.)

Some suggestions for the grammar:

change "control" to "charge"

"possesing strong elements of fire"

Ok, I am in no way a master/proffesor in English but I am quite sure that this means "it has strong resemblance to fire", and I don't think that is what you wanted to write.

"it's vast power surpasses even the white dragon"

Ok power can't exactly surpass a being.

You should write:

+even that of the white dragon" or "even the white dragon's" or "even the power of the white dragon"

Anyway I want to stress that I am just a student, whose second language is English (though compared to my class I am pretty good), I have said what I said to the best of my knoweledge, but being just a student I might be wrong.

[ragnarok1945]

for some reason the first two cards won't show up for me, so I'll just do the remaining 3

 

I'm a little unsure of 3200 atk and lv9 vanilla. 3200 atk and lv9 is nothing unheard of, but usually they tend to have specific summoning requirements

 

9/10

[-Griffin]

There is no pre-existing support for these, and no new support posted with them. Therefore, they're pretty much unrunnable. The ATK is fine, since it's far less useful than Blue-Eyes or something similar, but there's no reason to use these since FIRE doesn't have the support needed to make the Deck more viable than any other.

The first is nice-ish with Cyberdarks I guess. None others have use.

[~Oleon~]

These are absolutely - terrible.

Vanillas show NOTHING without support - if you are telling a story put something like [A Story of Vanillas] or something.

 

I'm sorry but this guy seems to make these the most hellish creatures created.

[Lord Smeagle]

I love the story, but I can't really give you a good rating until you show me some support for them.

 

In other words, why would I use these cards over another Normal Monster with 1800/2500/3200 ATK?

[jayjack]

There's a rule in Yugioh, called the 3000 ATK rule. This rule states that all monsters without a drawback or condition cannot have more then 3000 original ATK. The only card ever to break this rule (That i know of) is "Super Conductor Tyranno". (For more info, click here)

This rule is heavily applied to vanillas. In fact, no vanilla can have 3000 ATK except Blue-Eyes, which is considered the strongest vanilla. This will always stay that way.

 

Just wanted to state that.

 

Anyway, I hate vanillas since i cannot judge by effect. I'm not gonna rate, cause otherwise you'd get really low score.