Dragon Master Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 These card are made my TAG and Me (Dragon Master) These are the first 3 more r on the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Slight grammar problems, but they're pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 there r no grammar error i spelled checked all of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 I didn't say spelling error, I said grammar error. Sly Cooper - If you call it right, randomly select one card from your opponents hand and add it to your hand. If you call it wrong, your opponent randomly selects 1 card from your hand and adds it to his/her hand. This is how it should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bardar Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 it should be Main Phase in Sly's effect. Capitalize deck in Bentley's effect, and add an s to the word card, after Equip Spell. and for The Murray, his effect should be written as: Once per turn, Tribute one monster on your side of the field. This monster gains 1000 ATK until the end of the turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 The pictures needs alot of improvement. The effects have some grammar errors. Not too bad though! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Could use better pics its fairly good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yes they r good those r the best pics me and tag found Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yes they r good 8/10 Why are you rating your own cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 sorry was not paying attention i was doing something at the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 The pictures need backgrounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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