Ambushed By Fire

[AHumanNumber]

[align=center]I like burn effects, so i started messing around and this is what i came up with, the OCG may be a little off and any help with that will definitely be appreciated, along with constructive criticism on the card's effect and whether it's OPed or UPed(more likely the former).

 

 

Select up to 2 monsters your opponent controls. When 1 of the selected monsters is sent from the field to the Graveyard' date=' inflict 500 damage to your opponent. You can pay 1000 Life Points to Tribute the selected monster(s) for the Tribute Summon of a FIRE monster, the monster is returned to your hand at the End Phase of the turn this card was activated.[/quote'][/align]

[Inferno I20]

ok some OCG errors

-one=1

-Monsters=monsters (lower-cased)

-"Each time" should be changed to "When..."

its pretty ok

8/10

[AHumanNumber]

Thanks for the OCG help, i fixed the errors.

[ParaToxic]

I like it, but isn't it a little bit overpowered :P

I mean, u are able to get rid of 2 opponent monsters for just 1000 lp, and u get a monster for yourself, even though it gets returned to ur hand. U can just use SPIRIT monsters such as "Hino-Kagu-Tsuchi". He's a FIRE attribute monster, and his eff is "Return to hand" anyway.

I would change the offering part to this: "You can tribute selected monster(s) to special summon a FIRE attribute monster by paying life points equal to the tributed monster levels * 200". The return to hand eff should stay :)

Total score: 8/10

[ragnarok1945]

burn is small

 

despite the name it's interesting it has nothing to do with FIRE monsters, but I'll give you 8.3/10 for it