Mendatt the Elf Mage Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 The Avenging Archetype consists of two subtypes, Justiciar and Demonic. When a monster in the main line is sent to the graveyard, you Special Summon it's counterpart during your next Standby Phase, and activate an effect. RFP and anti-Special Summon cards like Archlord Kristya are hell to this Archetype. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Demonic Knight'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Demonic Knight'', increase the defense of all ''Avenging Justiciar'' monsters you control by 300 until your end phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Justiciar Knight'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Justiciar Knight'', increase the attack of all ''Avenging Demonic'' monsters you control by 300 until your end phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Demonic Magician'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Demonic Magician'', send one monster you control to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the graveyard, special summon ''Avenging Justiciar Magician'' from your graveyard during your next standby phase. If this card is special summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Justiciar Magician'', send one monster your opponent controls to the graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Demonic Dragon'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Demonic Dragon'', increase your life points by 500. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Justiciar Dragon'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Justiciar Dragon'', decrease your opponents life points by 500. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Demonic Gardna'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Demonic Gardna'', any monsters you control other than ''Avenging Justiciar Gardna'' cannot be destroyed during your opponents next Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Justiciar Gardna'' from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Justiciar Gardna'', ''Avenging Demonic Gardna'' cannot be destroyed during your opponents next Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Demonic Trickster'' during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Demonic Trickster'', give control of a monster you control to your opponent. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon ''Avenging Justiciar Trickster'' during your next Standby Phase. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of ''Avenging Justiciar Trickster'', take control of a monster your opponent controls. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Ideas, as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 It is okay. A chain effect of monsters, good idea. Although, you have a couple OCG errors: ' = " special summon = Special Summon draw phase, end phase = Draw Phase, End Phase graveyard = Graveyard I swore there was something more, but I can't remember it. These are really useless without each other, but they are together, so... The effects are a bit bland. They're all about Summoing each other with some short 1 line effect. I got really in-depth with these, they for some reason just 'ding' for me. I like it. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kemren_18 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 well.. you have amazing pictures and good and possible effects but has some OCG errors...but the entire effect is good.please look at the OCG guidelines to improve your effect grammars.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadoeh Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 The pics are just incredible!!! I love how everyone has an opposite!! 10/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DA Ripper Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Yeah u got some OCG errors, capitals, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 most of the OCG errors are just capitalization problems, which is small that aside, the effects are good, just that they're all TOO similar. Deviate them a bit more 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mendatt the Elf Mage Posted March 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 The effects are not supposed to deviate much. Do you mean the pairs have similar effects? Because if so, that is intended.Meanwhile, off to correct the OCG.Also, the short one line effects... If you have one or two pairs of these on your field, your opponent will rarely if ever get to attack you directly. Of course, you would have to get both cards in a pair to do that, but their effects are be quite powerful in combination with each other.I tried to have the 's be "s, but they were, well, spaces, when I finished.There, I've got it. I fixed an error with the Gardna's where I typed that they should be special summoned during the draw phase, and I figure out how to do "s (two '.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mendatt the Elf Mage Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Bump! yay.Hmm...Time to add some more. But I need to fine-tune this a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mendatt the Elf Mage Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Bump. Again. This is getting nowhere...Someone needs to post more feedback, or these won't get anywhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mendatt the Elf Mage Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Come on! someone post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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