Recteik Shade Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Normal Summoned negate the effects of all face-up Trap Cards on the field and destroy them. Inflict damage to both you and your opponent's Life Points equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this effect x400. As long as this card remains face-up on the field Trap Cards can not be activated. Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recteik Shade Posted March 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recteik Shade Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 this just basically just Jinzo with a burn effect not too creative of an effect, although it should be a reasonably balanced out one 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Jurakinzo!nice nice. not too Oped, not too dull. Good9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 I see alot of OCG errorsif you would post the effect in a spoiler, I could fix it. I just don't want to have to rewrite the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 OCG issues I can see, but I can't re-write it all. But the easy ones to fix: "face up" = "face-up" - the dash is important. There is some basic punctuation error I can see, but as I said I won't fix it unless you post the Card Lore. Pic is alright, not great though. Effect seems balanced and interesting. Rating: 6/10 - OCG errors dulls the rating a lot and even though its balance and good, its dull and unoriginal. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recteik Shade Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 At least ur honest i'll post Lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 jurrisic jinzo with burn, it's fine feels, copyed, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 When this card is Normal Summoned negate the effects of all face-up Trap Cards on the field and destroy them. Inflict damage to both you and your opponent's Life Points equal to the amount of cards destroyed by this effect x400. As long as this card remains face-up on the field Trap Cards can not be activated. fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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