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[align=center]= Ally Brute Archetype =

 

My newest creation, the Ally Brute archetype, isn’t based on a specific aspect, the thing that makes them great though, is their ability to work in synergy with each other. This has been something some archetypes on YCM have been missing lately (including some of mine I will say). Let this be a little mind refresher for you in being able to make archetypes that flow more.

 

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[spoiler=Ally Brute - Tzeentch]

= Image: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/049/7/d/Warhammer___Tzeentch_by_GENZOMAN.jpg =

 

.Image by *GENZOMAN.

 

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= Effect =

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, "Ally Brute" monsters you control cannot be attacked, except for "Ally Brute - Tzeentch".

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Kenobi]

= Image: http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/f/2010/070/0/1/Kenobo_by_GENZOMAN.jpg =

 

.Image by *GENZOMAN.

 

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= Effect =

 

When this card is added to your hand by the effect of an “Ally Brute” monster, Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. This card's Level is then treated as 2 and the original ATK of this monster becomes 800.

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Leanna]

= Image: http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/f/2010/030/9/0/Warcraft_Deathstalker_Leanna_by_GENZOMAN.jpg =

 

.Image by *GENZOMAN.

 

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= Effect =

 

When this card destroys a Level 4 or lower monster by battle, add 1 "Ally Brute" monster to your hand.

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Sky Guardian]

= Image: http://th04.deviantart.net/fs50/300W/i/2009/323/b/d/Michael_by_GENZOMAN.jpg=

 

.Image by *GENZOMAN.

 

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= Effect =

 

1 "Ally Brute" Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

This card is also treated as a Winged Beast-Type monster while on the field and in the Graveyard. When an "Ally Brute" monster you control attacks a monster your opponent controls, all card effects are negated until the Damage Step.

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Antler Beast =EffectModified=]

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.Image from Yu-Gi-Oh!5D`S Archive.

 

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= Effect =

 

If this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing an "Ally Brute" monster, you can add that monster to your Deck. When this card destroys a monster by battle, return 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck, then draw 1 card.

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Shadow Knight =EffectModified=]

= Image: http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/DarkKnight.png =

 

.Image by Father Wolf.

 

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= Effect =

 

Once per duel, when this card is selected as an attack target, remove it from play to end the Battle Phase. Special Summon it during the End Phase and add 2 "Ally Brute" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

[spoiler=Brutal Defense]

= Image: http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c78/wolfberserker/Defense.png =

 

.Image by Father Wolf.

 

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= Effect =

 

When an "Ally Brute" monster you control is attacked by a monster with the same attribute, remove from play 1 card in your Graveyard to negate the attack.

 

[spoiler=Brute Draw]

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.Image by HP Doom.

 

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= Effect =

 

Remove from play 1 "Ally Brute" monster in your hand. Draw 2 cards.

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Shining Mortal]

= Image: http://i48.tinypic.com/im1j6h.png =

 

.Image by HP Doom.

 

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= Effect =

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, all "Ally Brute" monsters you control gain 1 Level, except this card.

 

[spoiler=Ally Brute - Keira =EffectModified=]

= Image: http://th07.deviantart.net/fs50/300W/i/2009/329/7/1/Castle_Age___Keira_the_knight_by_GENZOMAN.jpg =

 

.Image by *GENZOMAN.

 

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= Effect =

 

When this card is Summoned, roll a six-sided die and activate the corresponding effect:

● If you rolled a 1: Add 1 "Ally Brute" monster from your Deck to your hand. ● If you rolled a 2: Discard 1 card from your hand. ● If you rolled a 3: Switch control of this card to your opponent. This card cannot attack, be Tributed or be used to Synchro Summon a monster while it is face-up on your opponent's field. ● If you rolled a 4: Destroy this card. ● If you rolled a 5: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Ally Brute" monster from your Graveyard. ● If you rolled a 6: Draw a card for every "Ally Brute" monster you control. If you control 3 or more "Ally Brute" monsters, discard 1 card from your hand.

 

 

 

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[spoiler=Archetype BanList]

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Limited

 

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[spoiler=DeckList]

Monsters -19-:

Ally Brute - Antler Beast [3]

Ally Brute - Tzeentch [3]

Ally Brute - Kenobi [3]

Ally Brute - Leanna [3]

Ally Brute - Shadow Knight [2]

Ally Brute - Shining Mortal [2]

Ally Brute - Keira [2]

Sangan [1]

 

Spell Cards -11-:

Brute Draw [3]

Smashing Ground [2]

Brutal Defense [2]

Book of Moon [2]

Reinforcement of the Army [1]

Heavy Storm [1]

 

Trap Cards -10-:

Starlight Road [2]

Waboku [2]

Bottomless Trap Hole [2]

Mirror Force [1]

Torrential Tribute [1]

Trap Dustshoot [1]

Solemn Judgment [1]

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shame you can't change the lv of the tuner for the 2nd card

 

But nevetheless it'll still show itself well for the synchro summoning' date=' so I find it balanced and will give the cards 9.2/10

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I dun get it, unless I haven't added a card to do that. Expect one soon.

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Tzeenetch is good. Nice work on him.

Kenobi is awesome. Very nice work.

Leanna is UPed to me. Something about her seems really off, probably the part about the Level 3 destruction.

Sky Guardian is just <3

Antler Beast is meh.

Overall, good. Well made, nice pics.

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Tzeenetch is good. Nice work on him. Why thank you.

Kenobi is awesome. Very nice work. Thanks. Fixing its text.

Leanna is UPed to me. Something about her seems really off' date=' probably the part about the Level 3 destruction. [b']I will change it to Level 4 or lower.[/b]

Sky Guardian is just <3 <3

Antler Beast is meh. Meh. I might find some fixes to make it better.

Overall, good. Well made, nice pics.

 

What is wrong with the text on Kenobi? Card Maker was messin' up so I made it in GIMP. Fix is coming.

 

Simple effects' date=' work well with eachother. In some way you have fused GB and BW. [b']If I did that, this could be meta. Thanks :3.[/b]

 

Lol, great job with them!

 

I will be working on what Queen of Broken Hearts commented on. I will also being making some new cards, most likely Spell Cards.

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All Antler Beast has is a piercing damage effect while on the field' date=' a bit boring for that effect, give it another one. [b']I will test this card to see how it works.[/b]

 

Leanna's effect is also short, but given she's only lv4, I say she's just fine. This will go threw testing as well.

 

9/10 for your updates

 

If my brother will cooperate, I will begin testing tonight with my Machina and Warrior Deck.

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Cannot "During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent." be summed up with "This card inflicts Piercing Damage"?

 

Anyways, the updates are fine, you have forgotten to put "an" before "attack" in Shadow Knight's effect.

 

Btw, are those the pics I gave you? The GENZOMAN pics?

 

They will get a solid 8.4/10.

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Cannot "During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card' date=' inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent." be summed up with "This card inflicts Piercing Damage"? [b']But in the TCG, it isn't put as "This card inflicts Piercing Damage" and please, don't give me that stupid excuse that most people use by saying "OMG CYBERDARK HORN SAYS IT CHANGE NAO!" because I could care less about that card tbh. Just saying because ot annoys me sometimes.[/b]

 

Anyways, the updates are fine, you have forgotten to put "an" before "attack" in Shadow Knight's effect. ....I will fix.

 

Btw, are those the pics I gave you? The GENZOMAN pics? Yes.

 

They will get a solid 8.4/10.

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Overall pretty good' date=' I would like to see more connection between the cards though. [b']They support each other, searches them. I will try to work them together some more.[/b]

Good Pictures. Thanks.

Why isn't Antler Beast a Beast-Warrior? I will have to get a ruling on that first, because it being a Beast-Warrior might mess with the deck strategy. I will have it also treated as a Beast in the effect.

8.5/10

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[align=center]Testing Session #1

 

Match #1

 

Ally Brute vs Machina Gadgets

 

Game #1

 

Ally Brute starts strong, keeping the opponent's field empty. Goes for Keira summon but rolls a 4, destroying itself. Machina Gadgets are really stuck from getting anything going. Ally Brute continues to clear the field. Machinas get out Machina Fortress, which is then Book of Mooned. Ally Brute gets out Brutal Defense, stopping any threat from Machian Fortress. Tzeentch is then M-Coned, leaving space for a direct attack. Summons Antler Beast adding Tzeencth to the deck. Ally Brute gets a Stardust, but is then Shirnked and destroyed by Fortress. Ally Brute manages to keep a defense going, but with Life Points depleting and are eventually beaten.

 

Ally Brute LP: 0

Machina Gadgets LP: 4500

 

<(★)>

 

Game 2:

 

Machina Gadgets side in Imperial Iron Wall to negate Brute Draw and Brutal Defense. Machinas start out pounding with Gearframe and Fortress on the field. Shadow Knight removes itself, leaving a 5700 ATK coming straight at Ally Brute. Normal summonds Keira, gets a 2, discarding 1 card from the hand. Synchros for Goyo and steals Gearframe. Machine Gadgets get out a second Solidarity and summon Blue Thunder T-45 to beat down opponent.

 

Ally Brute LP: 0

Machina Gadgets LP: 7600

 

Machina Gadgets win the Match 2-0

 

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Testing proves the following:

- Ally Brute - Sky Guardian would be better as a Level 6, due to the Level combinations.

- Ally Brute - Keira is to inconsistant.

- Ally Brute - Antler Beast is UPed and needs another effect.

- Ally Brute - Shadow Knight is bad and needs an effect change.

- Brute Draw is a more of a disadvantage at times.

- Brutal Defense is a good and consistant card.

- Ally Brute - Tzeentch is easy to use and good.

- This archetype is slow.

 

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how do you test your cards?

*sigh* i have my own archetypes but i cant test it out, i really wish this site enabled you to duel others online with your cards (well the balanced ones)

its really nice to know that people are creating their own archetypes, it shows how creative people can get because each archetype has its own personality

 

i noticed some things that could be fixed:

Ally Brute-Shadow Knight-

it should say "when this card is selected as an attack target" instead of "when this card is targeted to an attack"

* i kinda think it is overpowered because it can become an impenetrable wall and a constant monster recycler. maybe its just me i dont know

 

Ally Brute-Keira-

here effect should look like this

When this card is Summoned, roll a six-sided die and activate the corresponding effect:

1: bla,bla,bla

2: bla

3: yadaydayada

4: so on and so forth

that was just an example not the actual thing -__-

i got the OCG from "dangerous machine type-6" by the way...

*her effect is pretty ok not overpowered or underpowered

 

overall-9/10

great so far, i wonder how many you will create...

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how do you test your cards? I usually use YVD or duel IRL be proxying cards.

*sigh* i have my own archetypes but i cant test it out' date=' i really wish this site enabled you to duel others online with your cards (well the balanced ones) [b']Meh, YVD is for that.[/b]

its really nice to know that people are creating their own archetypes, it shows how creative people can get because each archetype has its own personality Yeah I know.

 

i noticed some things that could be fixed:

Ally Brute-Shadow Knight-

it should say "when this card is selected as an attack target" instead of "when this card is targeted to an attack" I might change it to something different so hang on.

* i kinda think it is overpowered because it can become an impenetrable wall and a constant monster recycler. maybe its just me i dont know. It is a once per duel thing and comes back during the end phase so =/

 

Ally Brute-Keira-

here effect should look like this

When this card is Summoned, roll a six-sided die and activate the corresponding effect:

1: bla,bla,bla

2: bla

3: yadaydayada

4: so on and so forth

that was just an example not the actual thing -__- I got it ;3

i got the OCG from "dangerous machine type-6" by the way... Okay.

*her effect is pretty ok not overpowered or underpowered I find it inconsistant, but that is just me.

 

overall-9/10

great so far, i wonder how many you will create...

 

I will be working on these cards.

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