Theinen the Dark Sphinx

[DARKPLANT RISING]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 500 Life Points when an "Dark Armed Dragon" on your side of the field is destroyed; then you can Special Summon this monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, you can discard 1 DARK Monster to increase the ATK of this card by 3000 points until the end of the End Phase of your turn. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can remove from play 2 DARK Monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon it from your Graveyard to Special Summon it during your next End Phase. When this card is Special Summoned this way, it loses 1000 ATK.

[AHumanNumber]

It may be because i'm fairly new to making cards or that i don't spend much time playing Yu-gi-oh anymore but this card seems overpowerd. Dark Armed Dragon isn't paticularly hard to get out and at the cost of 500 LP you can whip out this 6500 ATK golliath, granted it's temporary and a one time but it still seems a little much.

[Chaos Flame]

Its a bit too strong, and there's a typo near the end. Also, you state it cannot be Special Summoned except when DAD is destroyed, but then you say it has a way to Special Summon itself. 8/10

[Shocked]

Very great pic. I like it so much. But need IMG Credit.

 

The effect bit OP'd. But It's okay, just need little fixing

 

The OCG is fine. I see no errors on it. But dunno exactly.

 

8.2 / 10

[Jazin Kay]

Image credit is on the card. [/facepalm]

 

I like it, but I'm not sure how much it resembles the original Theinen, if that's what you were going for.

[Lord Ursus]

Whatever connection lies between Theinen and DAD is beyond me.

 

This card is also absurdly overpowered.

 

OCG fix:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand, Deck or Graveyard by paying 500 Life Points when an "Dark Armed Dragon" you control is destroyed. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, you can discard 1 DARK Monster to increase the ATK of this card by 3000 points until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 DARK Monsters in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon it from your Graveyard. If you do, it loses 1000 ATK and is sent to your Graveyard during the End Phase.

 

G.

[ragnarok1945]

"you can discard 1 DARK Monster to increase the ATK of this card by 3000 points until the end of the End Phase of your turn." <----3000 atk is too much of a boost, even if it's only for 1 turn

 

plus you could just say End Phase, not End Phase of your turn

 

I'd lower the boost to only 1500ish instead, and that's enough

 

8/10