Shadow Soul Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Hey, what's happenin, just posted my first card, this sites a sick concept, I'm new but I'll have a contest or convo with anyone who's keen, peace!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 No,no,no,no,nononononononooooooooooooooo.1.) I hope you know about other types you can make other than normals.2.) If you must make them like that, Feind and Effect are like this, not that.3.) A bit opp'ed.4.) Card codes are not in numbers. Instead of 8888-8888, you could make a set (like Arachnid Lords, which would be ARLO) and end in EN001, or what ever the card number is.5.) All words in the tital have Capitals in the tital.6.) It has no Effect, so why is there Effect in the Sub-type. But, nice picture on the card, and I have seen worse. I'm normaly a nice marker, but since I had no sleep last night after an energy caffine drink, I'm now hard for this morning. Sorry.Retry, but it is your first card and you haven't made an epic-failure. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Soul Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Ok bro, I'm just learnin the ropes, I thought all insects bein destroyed upon it's summoning was an effect, no?, anyway, it'a all good, as long as it looks at least duelable I'm cool with it, thanks for the heads up, how about this sick beast?.................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangketan Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Next time you should make effect monsters to attract viewers to rate it.good job [7/10] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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