barsam Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 I was bored so I made a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tacobill123 Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 not bad, a lil confusing. you should say "This card cannot be Special Summoned"10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Tacobill123....uhh.."not bad and a 10/10"....no dude...not a 10/10,...MANY MISTAKES..and no he should not say that next time READ THE EFFECT!!!!!it does not mean This card cannot be Special Summoned Effect FIXES:"When this card is Normal Summoned you can draw 1 more card during your Draw Phase. Discard 1 card during your Standby Phase. After your 3rd during your Opponent's Draw Phase, your Opponent may draw cards equal to the number of cards you discarded." Underpowered..i mean come on you gain NOTHING!!!!!!you opponent gains something.... ATK and DEF balance is Okay....5/10...i did not like it For the love of god..and OCG(xD)... dont be bored again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Grammar problems, good pic, underpowered. Good for a Dark World Deck though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 well, it could be reworded a bit but it's pretty good i guess.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Tacobill123....uhh.."not bad and a 10/10"....no dude...not a 10/10' date='...MANY MISTAKES..and no he should not say that next time READ THE EFFECT!!!!!it does not mean This card cannot be Special Summoned Effect FIXES:"When this card is Normal Summoned you can draw 1 more card during your Draw Phase. Discard 1 card during your Standby Phase. After your 3rd during your Opponent's Draw Phase, your Opponent may draw cards equal to the number of cards you discarded." Underpowered..i mean come on you gain NOTHING!!!!!!you opponent gains something.... ATK and DEF balance is Okay....5/10...i did not like it For the love of god..and OCG(xD)... dont be bored again[/quote'] You're great man, you basically took everything I wanted to write. It is a pretty bad card, but a cool picture. 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 The effect needs a lot of improvement, but otherwise, pretty cool! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 kool not bas 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 There a few grammar problems but other than that 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Weird. But ok, I guess. 6/10, my highest rating for you yet! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Its a little confusing. So after your 3rd Draw Phase does its effect restart? Or does your opponent draw the same amount the cards you discarded every 3 Draw Phases, like you 6th, 9th, etc.? Also you don't capitalize "Must" or "Draw". I'd give 6/10 since you don't gain from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 not bad' date=' a lil confusing. you should say "This card cannot be Special Summoned"10/10[/quote']my too 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 must draw, does need to be caped, neither does by in Standby, and you spelled opponent wrong, 8/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 Nice name, bad pik Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 i agree with everbody here5/10please make more cards, you have some skills, just learn a few things, and you will be golden ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 The effect needs a lot of improvement' date=' but otherwise, pretty cool! 8/10[/quote'] I like it, 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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