WrathMonkey Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Okay, I've started making a set called WLS - World's Last Stand. It's based around the Apocalypse, with monstrosities that result because of it, as well as the good survivors who still hold strong. Rate the set, and, if you could, the individual cards. ^.^ Flavour Text for the Set: Something from the deepest, darkest depths of the world arose, wiping out existence. The moon crashed into the Earth, meteors reigned every day and every night. Humans mutated, and even their spirits seemed corrupted by this unspeakably evil force. Some, however, withstood the corruption, and became the last stand of mankind. [attachment=18065][attachment=18066][attachment=18067][attachment=18068][attachment=18069][attachment=18070][attachment=18071][attachment=18072][attachment=18073][attachment=18074] -Fixed Ragnaros the End so that it is not destroyed by Apocalypse.-Added Sanctuary in the End.-Added Deliverer of Judgement.-Fixed just about every card's OCG Here are the old ones: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT What's OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saku Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 the Pics are really nice but ONE Small problem,nothing major. APOCALYPSE DESTROYS RAGNAROS! It doesnt say its unaffected by its effect which wil inturn remove it from play.ALSO Why is Apocalypse continuous? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 I didn't see that Apocalypse destroys Ragnaros, which is obviously a mistake on my part. I'll change that now. However, Apocalypse is continuous for two reasons: -The idea of the Apocalypse is that it is going on during the span of the duel-You need Apocalypse to be in play to activate some of the other cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT What's OCG? Official Card Grammar...Or Orignal Card Game...We use Official Card Grammar.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT What's OCG? Official Card Grammar...Or Orignal Card Game...We use Official Card Grammar.. My "OCG" is relatively good for a first-timer (and that I hard play the YuGiOh TCG >.>), and I understand there are a few minor mistakes in there, but overall it's not so bad that it would make the whole card crap... If someone would point out where I spoofed the "OCG", I would appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Oh..Plz not me..I know (Everyone says) my OCG is "Gr8" or Perfect...but..i just fixed some C*** card so i dont feel like it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Oh..Plz not me..I know (Everyone says) my OCG is "Gr8" or Perfect...but..i just fixed some C*** card so i dont feel like it.. No problem. I'm sure that my mistakes were minor technicalities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yep...compared to others...They are Godly...belive me i nearly vometed from most cards ive seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT did you even read the cards? his OCG is like almost perfect =/ 9/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT did you even read the cards? his OCG is like almost perfect =/ 9/10 =) uh..no its not ..i found like 18 in total.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Work on your OCG more..that would help ALOT did you even read the cards? his OCG is like almost perfect =/ 9/10 =) uh..no its not ..i found like 18 in total.... all i could see is that when he wrote a nu8mber in the effect he didnt put it in numerical form (1), and he didnt capitalize Card after Trap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Uh...ill list 1 more...takes 100 Life Point Damage should be loses 100 Life Points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Uh...ill list 1 more...takes 100 Life Point Damage should be loses 100 Life Points ok still, thats not 18 things wrong, and in fact i am pretty certain, its better for his first, then when you started. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 I dont really like them, i feel they could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 I dont really like them' date=' i feel they could be better.[/quote'] Could you elaborate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathMonkey Posted December 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2007 Okay, I've fixed the OCG on the cards to the best of my ability. Voila! This could also be considered a bump... :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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