Gemini Monsters of Destiny

[Gorm13]

These cards are important for me as they are signature cards of the protagonist(s) of a fanfic I'm planning. Therefore I'd really like some feedback.

 

[spoiler=Old Versions]

 

 

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-- Increase this card's ATK by the combined Levels of all monsters on the field x 100.

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-- During battle between an attacking monster you control and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-- Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 monster with 1500 ATK or less from your Deck, except "Destined Enchantress". If the Summoned monster is a Gemini monster, you can pay 800 Life Points to treat it as an Effect Monster and have it gain its effect.

 

 

Update 30.03.2010

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-- When a Gemini Monster you control inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you can remove 1 Normal Monster in your Graveyard from play to draw 1 card.

 

 

Update 31.03.2010

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it again to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-- Once per turn you can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that removes a Gemini Monster(s) or WATER monster(s) from the field. If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon 1 Normal Monster with 1500 ATK or less from your Graveyard during the End Phase.

[A.Prime]

1. I'll try to correct your OCG errors

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while is Face Up on the field or in (your or both players) Graveyard. While this card is Face Up on the field, you can Normal Summon it again to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Increase this card's ATK by the Total Levels of all monsters on the field x 100.

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while Face Up on the field or in (your or both players) Graveyard. While this card is Face Up on the field, you can Normal Summon it again to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

During battle between an attacking monster you control and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while is Face Up on the field or in (your or both players) Graveyard. While this card is Face Up on the field, you can Normal Summon it again to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 monster with 1500 ATK or less from your Deck, except "Enchantress of Fate". If the Summoned monster is a Gemini monster, you can pay 800 Life Points to treat it as an Effect Monster and have it gain its effect.

 

2. I like the pics

 

your rate isss 8/10

[Gorm13]

Are you sure about those OCG errors? I copied most of the text directly from real cards and if those don't use the correct grammar, then who does? Although you might be right about a few of them, wich I copied from older cards.

 

For Example: "combined Levels" comes from The Calculator, I've only ever read "total Levels" on ritual spell cards. And the first effect is the same for every Gemini monster and always written like that.

 

But thanks for trying to help.

[Deustodo]

You are right, he is wrong, he probably doesn't know about the existence of Gemini Monsters, 9.6/10 to you.

[Gorm13]

Update: I added a new monster to this set.

As of now there's still space for up to two additional monsters (at most one for each attribute, excluding DIVINE). I wouldn't mind getting ideas for their effects from others.

I still apreciate all other feedback as well, even the harshest critique.

[Gorm13]

Fifth card added, Flamekeeper's effect changed slightly.

 

Having learned just now that there is a difference between fate and destiny I changed these cards' names. There are other benefits of that change, for example that I can now make support cards for "destined" monsters (if I want to), as there are no "destined" monsters in the TCG.

 

If anyone wants to help, just answer one or more of these qustions:

1. Is the name change for the better or for the worse?

2. Should any effects be changed (for balancing, fun, or whatever)?

3. What would you add as the final monster of the set, if any? Name, effect, every idea is appreciated (except attribute, that's bound to be LIGHT).

4. Why is this set utterly terrible? (It's not like you have to love it, although I don't mind if you do.)