Art Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 I thought I'd make a dragon related monster. Just an experiment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Originality = 1/10 (cyberdark)OCG mistakes0.0000000000000000000000000000000000000001/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 don't be harsh with noobs GX deulist. it's ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 is is ok and GXduelist that is really harsh but ok for a new person jsut fix the grammer and the effect a little better it will be fine 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Yeah its a cool card but it would be broken with Foolish Burial+BEWD. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Calvin Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 it's an okay card!7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 hmm it shuld be Dragon-Type, and when writing a number in a card effect, they must be in numerical form (1) not (one) 8/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 uh..for people who think i was harsh...i hate cyberdarks thats why i gave it that rating and the 1 is for being a fire..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 7.9/10 its alright but you need better ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 it needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 Needs work. It is overpowered. Nice pic and there are some OCG mistakes 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 it just needs some work, but nothing truly bad. Good job, please make more cards, you are gonna be good ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Art Posted December 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 Thanks for the insight everybody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speed Dragon90 Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 It was not bad, I agree it needs some work, but GX I don't care if you gave that response because cyberdark made a similiar card and you hated it, that was still pretty harsh and it's by no means a bad card either I do think it should have a level limit to the Dragon Monster you remove from play like maybe somewhere around level 6, fix that and a little of your OCG and I'd give it a 9/10, 7.5/10 without the changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ajs Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 The card itself is not so bad picture, idea and all but it misses originality...6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 some grammar mistakes. cool picture 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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