White Hollow Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Lore:This Monster can only be Special Summoned by tributing one Warrior-Type and one Spellcaster-Type Monster. When this Monster is successfully Special Summoned on the field place 2 Blight Counters on this card(Max. 5). Each time a Spellcaster-Type Monster inflicts direct damage to your opponent place 1 counter on this card. You can remove any number of counters from this card to place them at a face up card that you can place a Counter on. You can tribute this Monster with 5 Counters to Special Summon one LIGHT Attribute Monster from your hand, deck or graveyard. If this Monster is destroyed while having 5 Counters inflict damage to the player who destroyed it equal to the number of cards in your hand(X1000). If "Filigree Sages" is on the field this Monster's ATK points are increased by 500 and its DEF points are deceased by 700. Should it be GFXed? Any OCG help? Any comments?CommentAndDon'tSpam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 BUMB >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 I'm not good with OCG, but graveyard should be capitalised. I like the effect, plus the burn effect looks useful. I'd also use the Special Summoning ability a lot (I don't use Lightsworns, but I like LIGHT monsters :) ) Overall, it's a good card, nice one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Thanks anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 nice pic and about the OCG i think"One" should be 1and take out "succesfully" it's not needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 No one rates >.<Thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 lol you did't mentioned about rating on your first post so anyone prob not rate itanyway i rate it about 8/10 coz i dont really like ultra rare on the monster name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Should it be GFXed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 ummm, what is GFXed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Holos, borders, stickers....if you don't know these do not reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 I think it might look good GFXed. It's just one of those cards you can see as a shiny....... Shiny stuff....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Will do. Anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 After"If this Monster is destroyed while having 5 Counter" and " If "Filigree Sages" is on the field" there should be commas.Nice pic. 9.25/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Tanks Serenity ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 any time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 not Monster, Card tributing should be Tributing plus you shouldn't have two types on the subtext. Declare only one, then say it's also treated as the other in the text just say LIGHT monster, not LIGHT attribute but the idea behind the effects is still sound, so I'll give it 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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