Legend Lords ( first cards in around 8 months ratings plz)

[josh = jaden]

first cards ive made for about 8 months , bin away for a while ,, be honest and brutal if you must , i can take it !!!

 

 

Effect : This card may only be Special Summoned by removing 6 Fiend type monsters from your side of the field or Graveyard from play. This card can not battle with another DARK Attribute monster. This card loses 500 ATK points for every monster removed from the Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card. if a LIGHT monster battles this card and sends it to your Graveyard your opponent loses 100 Life Points for every card in their Graveyard.

 

 

 

Effect : This monster may only be Special Summoned by removing 6 Beast type monsters from your side of the field or Graveyard from play. If this monster Battles a 5 Star or lower monster equipt that monster to this card (maximum 5)(Battle damage is calculated Normally). For every LIGHT monster equipt to this card it gains 500 ATK and for every DARK monster it loses 500 ATK. If this cards ATK reaches 5000 remove it from play. If this cards ATK goes Below 2000 send it to your Graveyard. When 5 monsters are eqiupt to this card remove them from play to deal direct damage to your opponents Life Points equal to the total number of stars of all the monsters together halved. if the damage dealt is higher than 2500 pay 1000 Life Points to keep this card on your side of the field.

 

 

 

Effect : this card can not be Summoned or Set. This card may only be Special Summoned from Out of Play when 'Titan Lord Argonraith' and 'Titan Lord Aeroleer' are in your Graveyard. Once per your Battle Phase draw one card from your deck this card gains the following effect depending on the card drawn until your next Battle Phase.

Spell Card - this card can not be destroyed as a result of Battle (Damage Calculation is applied normally)

Trap Card - Remove One Monster card on your Opponents side of the field from play

Monster Card - If the drawn cards ATK points are 2000 or less this cards ATK becomes double the drawn cards ATK, If the drawn cards ATK is more than 2000 this cards ATK becomes the number of stars of the drawn card x500

 

!!! :) ratings please

[ragnarok1945]

change may to can

 

deck should be Deck

 

Fiend type should be Fiend-Type

 

DARK attribute monster should be DARK Monster

 

for the first card, I'd also make it so it can't be Tribute Summoned, otherwise it'd get Oped

 

the same goes for your 2nd card

 

and for your 3rd card, change the first sentence to this card cannot be NORMAL Summoned or Set

 

7/10