hell_sword2280 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Stellar Radiation Zone LORE: During each player's Standby Phases, place one Radiation Counter on all face-up Spell and Trap cards (excluding this one). Each player must pay Life Points equal to the number of Radiation Counters on their side of the field x 100 during their End Phases. Redemption of the Damned LORE: You can activate this card only when your opponent declares an attack and there are no monsters on your side of the field. Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. If the monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is on the field during your opponent's End Phase, destroy the monster. When the monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is sent to the Graveyard at your opponent's End Phase, send this card to the Graveyard. If the monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed by battle, remove that monster from play and flip this card face down. I'd personally like to simplify the language of "Redemption" but I really did the best I could with what I wanted it to do. I like to hear your responses, just be polite and offer advice that will improve any perceived shortcomings of the cards. Peace,hell_sword2280 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 CoOl7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 do these radiation counters last even after the end phase?do they stack? thanks sir... ^.^ this is a double-edged card.... here's 8/10 for the first card.... thanks.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hell_sword2280 Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 do these radiation counters last even after the end phase?do they stack? thanks sir... ^.^ this is a double-edged card.... here's 8/10 for the first card.... thanks.... Yes the Radiation Counters stay, that's how I wanted the card to be. I'm not sure what you mean by "stack", clarify please. Yes, it is indeed "double-edged" but it would be handy against an opponent running a continuous or equip-heavy deck. That is the intention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 nice to see a double edged sword on the first card, but it's balanced out I'm unsure if the 2nd card needs to be a continuous trap at all 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hell_sword2280 Posted April 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 nice to see a double edged sword on the first card' date=' but it's balanced out I'm unsure if the 2nd card needs to be a continuous trap at all 7/10[/quote'] Hm, good thought. I think I will change that. I wanted it to kinda be a cross between "Scrapiron Scarecrow" and "Call of the Haunted" or something like that. Thanks for the input! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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