Some new cards[Shadow wind]

[shadow wind]

Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by tributing 3 "EARTH" monsters on your field. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned. When this card destroys a monster by battle, your opponent cannot summon a monster next turn.

Lore:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is selected as an attack target, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Once per turn you can tribute one LIGHT monster to inflict 1000 damage. When this card is destroyed, draw 1 card, if that card is a monster card, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent, if it is not a monster card, you take 1000 damage.

[ragnarok1945]

"Fiend" monsters should be Fiend-Type Monsters

 

most of the quotes in your text you don't see them

 

and dropping their atk to 0 PERMANENTLY seems a bit too much

 

life points should be Life Points

 

tribute should be Tribute

 

for Winged Dragon Fortress of the Light, in the part where you said inflicting 1000 damage, you have to say WHO you're inflicting it to. Yes we all know you meant your opponent, but you have to say it

 

8/10