Nitro Death Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 Hello, i have come up with some Demon Warrior cards. Before i go any farther, i know at least 1 person will say "Overused pic" if you happen to be a person who says that, please, say which cards have the pics, so i might change it. State opinions in comments, and rate please. Lore will be stated. Happy Hunting! [spoiler=Effect Monsters] This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Pyro-Type monsters from your Graveyard from play. When this card is removed from the field to the graveyard from the result of battle or a monster, Trap or Spell effect, treat this card as an equip card and equip it to a monster on your opponents side of the field. The equipped monster's controller loses 500 Life Points at the end of every Stanby-Phase of their turn. This card can only be special Summoned to your opponents side of the field by removing from play one Pyro-Type monster from your Graveyard and tributing one monster on your opponents side of the field. This card can only be summoned to your opponent's side of the field. The controller of this card loses 700 Life Points each of His/Her Standby Phases. The controller of this card may tribute one face-up monster to stop this effect. Pay 300 Life Points. Once per turn, during your main phase, you may Special Summon one level 5 or lower "Demon Warrior" from your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may put one token (-200 ATK -200 DEF) onto a monster on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, the tokens remain on the field. Each time this card destroys a monster and sends it to the graveyard draw a card. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you may flip this card into face-down defense position. When this card is Flip Summoned, select one monster your opponent controls. Return the monster to the controllers respective hand. This card gains 400 ATK for each "Demon Warrior" in your graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, you may special summon any level 4 or lower "Demon Warrior" with 2000 ATK or less. The controller of this card takes 200 points of damage each of His/Her Stanby Phases. (This is not optional.) Select one monster on your opponents side of the field, as long as this card is face-up on the field, the selected monster cannot attack. [spoiler=Normal Monsters] The basic defense for a front line attack. Most Demon Warriors use them as meat shields. [spoiler=Ritual Cards] This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Rising War". While this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select any other "Demon Warriors" as an attack target. This card gains ATK 200 Points for every "Demon Warrior" in the Graveyard. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Demon Warrior - Pyro Emperor" You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a tribute from the field or your hand. [spoiler=Spell Cards] This card can only be equipped to a "Demon Warrior" monster. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 600 points Tribute one "Demon Warrior" card from the field to the Graveyard. Inflict damage equal to the tributed monsters original ATK to your opponents Life Points. Pay 2000 Life Points.If you have 2 or more "Demon Warrior" cards on your side of the field, they may all attack your opponents Life Points directly this turn. If your opponent activates a spell or trap card, He/She may select one "Demon Warrior" on your side of the field and send it to the Graveyard. [spoiler=Trap Cards] You can only activate this card while there is a face-up "Demon Warrior - Pyro Emperor" on your side of the field. All "Demon Warriors" on your side of the field are switched to attack position and gain 400 ATK points until the end of your opponents next turn. You can only activate this card when there is a face-up "Demon Warrior - Pyro Emperor" on your side of the field. All "Demon Warrior" cards gain 400 DEF and are switched to defense position until the end of your opponents next turn. You can only activate this card while there is a face-up "Demon Warrior - Pyro Emperor" on your side of the field. You may Special Summon up to 3 "Demon Warriors" that were destroyed by batte from your graveyard to your side of the field in Defense Position. If there are any face-up "Demon Warrior - Pawn Soldier(s)" on your side of the field, Increase the ATK of one "Demon Warrior - Pyro Emperor" by X points. where X is the number of "Demon Warrior - Pawn Soldier(s)" on your side of the field times 400 points. Please Remember To Rate!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy God Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 ~Forgot to capitalize "Graveyard" on Ocean Floor Predator~"defense position" should be "Defense Position"~"Pyro-type" should be "Pyro-Type"~"spell or trap card" should be "Spell or Trap Card" Only a few OCG errors, but the OCG is fine. Pictures aren't really overused, I accualy think they're quite good. 8.8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 all of the OCG errors have been pointed out already there's capitalization errors in the text, but that's minor for Flame Sorceror, the effect is a little bit on the basic end, and I'm unsure if you need a drawback for that summon effect with Ocean Floor Predator, I don't see why you made it FIRE and not WATER 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Death Posted April 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 all of the OCG errors have been pointed out already there's capitalization errors in the text' date=' but that's minor for Flame Sorceror, the effect is a little bit on the basic end, and I'm unsure if you need a drawback for that summon effect with Ocean Floor Predator, I don't see why you made it FIRE and not WATER 8.7/10[/quote']well, i made Ocean Floor Predator a FIRE, because it is not so much of a fish just like a demon mermaid, so i made it a fire sea serpent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Salior Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 most of the ocg has been pointed out, but its not OMG!!!! so i give it 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Death Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragon16 Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 These are some great cards i give it a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salior Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 pretty good, keep it up 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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