Ultimate Cyber End Dragon

[Silver93]

 

Effect:

"Cyber End Dragon" + 1 or more Machine-Type monsters

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card's original ATK is equal to the total number of Machine-Type monster in either player's Graveyard x 800. When this card attacks an opponent's monster, it gains 500 ATK for every Fusion Material Monster used for its Fusion Summon. This card inflict Piercing Damage. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove from play 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard instead.

[ragnarok1945]

and I can't read the effect even with the ctrl + option

 

can you just post the card a 2nd time and try copying the effect?

[Cloister]

Just ctrl + c and then ctrl + v...

[Silver93]

"Cyber End Dragon" + 1 or more Machine-Type Monsters

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon.Increase this monsters ATK by 500 for every Machine-Type monster in either player's Graveyard.

Additionaly,if this card attacks an opponent's monster,it gains 300 ATK during the Damage Step only for every Fusion Material Monsters used for it's Fusion Summon.During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.This card returns to the Extra Deck during the End Phase.

[ragnarok1945]

ok that's better

 

given it's lv12, it needs to have at least 6 Machine-Types to hold its own

 

I would take out the last effect for being on the field for only 1 turn, it's hard enough to summon as it is.

 

7/10

[Code~Red]

Nice picture, can't spot any OCG problems. 9/10

[Silver93]

Well...that isn't true,because it can deal a LOT of Damage + Difference from DEF Monsters.Just imagine 10 Machine-Type monsters in Graveyard.That means 5000 ATK + say 5 Fusion Material Monsters...6500 DMG.

[Neil Moffatt]

Yeah, but if you end up failing with your attack, you lose a lot of monsters, so I agree, for just 1 turn, it's not worth it, get rid of that effect and it'll improve.

[Cloister]

"Cyber End Dragon" + 1 or more Machine-Type monsters

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This monster gains 500 ATK for every Machine-Type monster in either player's Graveyard. When this card attacks an opponent's monster it gains 300 ATK during the Damage Step only for every Fusion Material Monsters used for its Fusion Summon. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.This card returns to the Extra Deck during the End Phase.

 

During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. - This card inflicts Piercing Damage.

 

Anyways, cool. I would not use it and it's kinda hard to get out since you first need an "CED". Would at least start off with 2000 ATK, but "CED" has 4000...

Well, think I'll give it 7/10.

Sorry to say this, I love this archetype, and this is not that good for it imo.

[Silver93]

*Updated*

 

- Level [10];

- ATK/DEF [2000/2000] - Can now be Summoned with Power Bond :D

- It stays longer on the Field.

 

 

* Should i put that it can't be targeted by Spell,Traps Effect Monsters?

[Cloister]

I would still have it Level 12 since "CED" is Level 10. It is good that it stays longer, but the last effect is not needed, would be better with a trigger effect that removes it from the field. Or that you need to remove Machine monsters from the Graveyard to keep it alive. But that wouldn't fit with the archetype itself.

 

Hard... Hmmm... I might find a way to slightly change the effect. Will PM you it then, K?

 

EDIT: No immunity for Spell, Trap or Monster Card effects.

[Silver93]

Ok.I'm waiting.

[Donsheo]

Not bad. The idea is great, OCG is okay, but I should not use it. It's hard to summon it and cards like Eltanin is way better because they also have a useable skill. And returning it to the Extra Deck make this card so weak. Maybe it should have unaffect by Spell Cards. But in this format it's not as strong as an Eltanin or CED/CTD.

 

8/10

[Guest JoshIcy]

Unusable, even with Fusion Subs. And a rather generic idea >

[Lord Smeagle]

Chimeratech Overdragon > This, in every concievable way.

 

I'm sorry, this was really a waste of time. I recommend scrapping this idea and using that pic for something cooler.

[Silver93]

Not bad. The idea is great' date=' OCG is okay, but I should not use it. It's hard to summon it and cards like Eltanin is way better because they also have a useable skill. And returning it to the Extra Deck make this card so weak. Maybe it should have unaffect by Spell Cards. But in this format it's not as strong as an Eltanin or CED/CTD.

 

8/10

[/quote']

 

Well,CED is CED[summon only by fusion;pierce],so,the improved one should be on the same effect,no?Eltanin has another effect,it's like when you say to summon an Lightsworn by the effect of an Gladiator Monster.

[Guest Zeonark]

Chimeratech Overdragon > This' date=' in every concievable way.

[/quote']

 

Goddammit. You beat me to it.

 

But yeah, Chimeratech does the job better and faster. If you had made this a DARK monster, Overload Fusion could've helped make this a bit more useful.

[Silver93]

*Updated*