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-The images can do with some backgrounds

+The points seem pretty balanced

-There are several OCG and spelling errors:

Invinsible=Invincible

one=1

deck=Deck

as a result of battle=by battle

Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points=This card gains 300 ATK

-IMO, I would replace the fake Types with real ones:

Turtle=Reptile-Type

Princess=Warrior

-Almost all the effects are repeated for different monsters. Mario, Luigi, Princess Peach, Yoshi and Birdo all have exact same effect of their ATK being increased for a certain monster on the field. Also, Baby Mario and Luigi, Yoshi's Egg and Koopa Troopa share the same effect of adding a specific card to your hand if it's destroyed by battle. These effects could have been less dull and repetitive if you included something original to each card.

-Mario and Luigi's effect can be pretty overpowered. If you control 4 Luigis and 1 Mario, then Mario would eventually gain 1200 points, making its ATK 3600! (And giving each Luigi 300 points making them have 2400 ATK each.

-Isn't "Parayoshi" the Final Smash "Super Dragon" from Super Smash Bros?

 

Overall, they're okay, but they do need some improvements to them. The main drawback is how repetitive the effects are. Fix those, and you might gain a lot more marks. But for now, 4.5/10.

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Nice. I like them, although Mario and Luigi forms should have and effect like if they get destroyed by battle, you can special summon the previous form if it's in your graveyard. (i.e. if Fire Mario is destroyed by battle, you can special summon a Mario from your graveyard and the same with Mario and Baby Mario) And perhaps a 1-Up mushroom trap? (if a Baby Mario or Baby Luigi on your side of the field is destroyed by battle, you can special summon the same monster from your graveyard.)

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-The images can do with some backgrounds

+The points seem pretty balanced

-There are several OCG and spelling errors:

Invinsible=Invincible

one=1

deck=Deck

as a result of battle=by battle

Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points=This card gains 300 ATK

-IMO' date=' I would replace the fake Types with real ones:

Turtle=Reptile-Type

Princess=Warrior

-Almost all the effects are repeated for different monsters. Mario, Luigi, Princess Peach, Yoshi and Birdo all have exact same effect of their ATK being increased for a certain monster on the field. Also, Baby Mario and Luigi, Yoshi's Egg and Koopa Troopa share the same effect of adding a specific card to your hand if it's destroyed by battle. These effects could have been less dull and repetitive if you included something original to each card.

-Mario and Luigi's effect can be pretty overpowered. If you control 4 Luigis and 1 Mario, then Mario would eventually gain 1200 points, making its ATK 3600! (And giving each Luigi 300 points making them have 2400 ATK each.

-Isn't "Parayoshi" the Final Smash "Super Dragon" from Super Smash Bros?

 

Overall, they're okay, but they do need some improvements to them. The main drawback is how repetitive the effects are. Fix those, and you might gain a lot more marks. But for now, 4.5/10.

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he knows wat he's talkin about, but not all people mind fake types, just the majority of members here

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