trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 my god, amazing [/sarcasm]. I can just see somebody using this and going "LOOK! I found two more of this card....Now what?" Bad nameYou call it a dragon and its a "Winged-Beast"????Looking for cards =/= Adding cards to your hand. The only thing I like about your card is the picture, which I have seen before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 omg just shut up canadian guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 ALOT of OCG errors... I will start with some of them.. graveyard=Graveyardtwo=2 (always have a number instead of the written word)Troyogon the first vegetairan dragon= Troyogon The First Vegetarian DragonYou need a period after them, and put Shuffle your deck afterwards, not shuffle your deck.... There is more, but this is the start.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 ALOT of OCG errors... I will start with some of them.. graveyard=Graveyardtwo=2 (always have a number instead of the written word)Troyogon the first vegetairan dragon= Troyogon The First Vegetarian DragonYou need a period after them' date=' and put Shuffle your deck afterwards, not shuffle your deck.... There is [b']alot[/b] more, but this is the start.. fix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 omg just shut up canadian guy he is telling the truth, might be a little harsh, but listen to him, he does not mean to be mean, it is just it pisses people off to see these kind of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 omg everything i fricken do on here is a fricken complaint hense my stars new playereither way what does ocg mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 omg everything i fricken do on here is a fricken complaint hense my stars new playereither way what does ocg mean New Member. lol. OCG = Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRaptor10 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 It's a nice simple effect. 9/10 usually names like that would have a comma in between so it would read "Troyogon, The First Vegetarian Dragon". but a long name like that would make it all squished up. the ocg i think should read as:"When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can add up to 2 "Troyogon, The First Vegetarian Dragon" from your Deck to your hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Do not use your new member as an excuse, when I first started, I was insulted because of my bad cards, but I did not flip out, I had more self-control, and if you do not want me to NEG you, stop complaining, and take our advise, I took everyone's advice, and LOOK! I MAKE WAAY BETTER CARDS THAN WHEN I FIRST STARTED!!! People are gonna be harsh here, and you may not like it, but do not expect anyone to pitty you just cuz you are a New Member... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRaptor10 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 omg everything i fricken do on here is a fricken complaint hense my stars new playereither way what does ocg mean ocg means original/official card grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 He should no that if he looked at his REPS.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 thanks arezwarrior u rock ure the only 1 that actually gave a good rating for a new member i o u 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 -_- you do realize he or she is judging you in a polite way so you do not flip out. Look, if I would of said 8/10, but you need to fix etc, you would not of flipped out on me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 omg whateveer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 It's a nice simple effect. 9/10 usually names like that would have a comma in between so it would read "Troyogon' date=' The First Vegetarian Dragon". but a long name like that would make it all squished up. the ocg i think should read as:"When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can add up to 2 "Troyogon, The First Vegetarian Dragon" from your Deck to your hand."[/quote'] I agree with rate. If you had this suggested effect with correct everything, I'd love your card. It is a good idea and life I said before, I like the picture owo. Don't get upset. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 I give up, I guess you have noo self-control.... I give up, you wont listen, I will not guide you anymore... you are on your own, have fun... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 im not upset i just hate all the complaints it gets anooying after a while so it good to hear something good for once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Well, listen to what we actually say, do not take offense, if you look closely, they are ACTUALLy givving you advice, it might be harsh, but it is still good for you, not EVERYTHING in life is gonna be exactly how you wanted, if it is, life would be boring... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 I see how you feel, but this is YCM, and people here can sometimes be unforgiving. (I've learned this the hard way too, lol) Everything I've said was to point out mistakes to help improve the card though. Just sayin'. FYI, the fixed version of your card would get a 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 prob woud lol but i fix it later it just hurts cause i spent 30 min on this card lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 prob woud lol but i fix it later it just hurts cause i spent 30 min on this card lolLook at what I wrote, that adivce will help you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 ok i will when i fell like it 2day sucked so hard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 What are you talking about? I think this Thread should now get locked, everything is getting off topic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 inb4lock. Imo, the part that takes the longest when making a card, is getting a picture that fits its effect/name. OCG/Creativity usually comes in a snap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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