Jet related cards.

[2057star2]

Look at these

Comments, Questions, Segestions.

P.S. Sorry for my misspelling

[Dasanies]

Of course. Its all American 10/10

[Sákura Haruno]

There are OCG errors here and there... some are op'ed... i would give it 7.5/10 just because it is original and a good idea

[IceBite]

Ok, but I see quite a few errors here:

First, for the missiles, they should really be union monsters, as a missile is useless unless launched.

Second, it's 'AssAult', not 'Assult'. Plus, that's an F-22A Raptor, in case you didn't know.

Third, it's not the 'B52 Stratto Bomber' (it's spelled 'Strato' by the way), its the 'B-52 Stratofortress'.

Forth, its specifically the 'A-10 Thunderbolt II', or the 'A-10 Warthog'.

Fifth, the Fusion for the A-10s should probably be called 'A10 Attack Wing'.

 

Other than that, pretty good. 6.8395/10.

[2057star2]

Ok' date=' but I see quite a few errors here:

First, for the missiles, they should really be union monsters, as a missile is useless unless launched.

Second, it's 'AssAult', not 'Assult'. Plus, that's an F-22A Raptor, in case you didn't know.

Third, it's not the 'B52 Stratto Bomber' (it's spelled 'Strato' by the way), its the 'B-52 Stratofortress'.

Forth, its specifically the 'A-10 Thunderbolt II', or the 'A-10 Warthog'.

Fifth, the Fusion for the A-10s should probably be called 'A10 Attack Wing'.

 

Other than that, pretty good. 6.8395/10.

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Ill fix it. OK? Ill post the V.2 soon.

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Here are the Fixes

Better?

[2057star2]

Heres my newest

[IceBite]

Better, there's still the spelling error with 'AssAult'. Plus, you didn't change the Missile. Oh, almost forgot, it spelled 'Missile', with an I after the double-S. Plus the 'Assult' Squad is a little powerful. Accurate, but over-powered. Other than that, better.

[2057star2]

There are OCG errors here and there... some are op'ed... i would give it 7.5/10 just because it is original and a good idea

 

What OCG errors?

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Better' date=' there's still the spelling error with 'AssAult'. Plus, you didn't change the Missile. Oh, almost forgot, it spelled 'Missile', with an I after the double-S. Plus the 'Assult' Squad is a little powerful. Accurate, but over-powered. Other than that, better.

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Oops. V.3s are coming soon

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Better' date=' there's still the spelling error with 'AssAult'. Plus, you didn't change the Missile. Oh, almost forgot, it spelled 'Missile', with an I after the double-S. Plus the 'Assult' Squad is a little powerful. Accurate, but over-powered. Other than that, better.

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Oh, Is 9200 ATK and 8500 DEF Ok? Im working on a subtraction on the ATK/DEF each time its destroyed. Little help on that?

[kuriboh fan]

some fake types i recommended making cards while on another window google yugioh types.

[Sákura Haruno]

Your lucky that i didn't say a lot of OCG errors... and don't expect me to fix them' to much work :) maybe someone else will do it... hint hint...

[2057star2]

Your lucky that i didn't say a lot of OCG errors... and don't expect me to fix them' to much work :) maybe someone else will do it... hint hint...

Look at my last post. V.3s are coming soon.

[Sákura Haruno]

The union card has OCG errors (I have union cards so i know) and so ya. that is not the only on but i don't feel like pointing them out (getting tired)

[2057star2]

Better' date=' there's still the spelling error with 'AssAult'. Plus, you didn't change the Missile. Oh, almost forgot, it spelled 'Missile', with an I after the double-S. Plus the 'Assult' Squad is a little powerful. Accurate, but over-powered. Other than that, better.

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