trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Theres probably alot of ocg errors and stuff but u know in not that skilled at making cards yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Is this supposed to be a Token card? The pics a blurry, I get wha you are saying, but you need to add more detail, and more than one sentence plz, it is kinda boring... This is an example of something you should of wrote: For every DARK monsters your opponent has on his/her side of the field, one of your Pyro-Type monsters get x200 ATK and x300 DEF. Something like that...(I know I made mistakes in my remake, this was an example that was a little better reamke) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRaptor10 Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 You spelled mystic wrong in the name. "For every Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field, increase the ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster on your side of the field by 200 points." Your opponent will most likely have around 1 or 2 monsters. that would mean an increase of 200 or 400 points. Even the 500 increase equip cards are better. I think you should up the attack increase to maybe 600 for each monster on your opponent's field. Also, you should make this an equip or continous spell card. 5/10 (no offense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Underpowered, blury image, spelling erros, why isn't this an equip card? I like the idea however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 itz my first spell card dint really think them out yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 too boring of an effect for the atk gain I'd still go with Shrink over this 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted April 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 ok then i wont make another spell vcard for a while until i almost done with the Renegades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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