ProSora Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 this was for a 1 on 1 that i couldn't enter >.> [align=center]Minerva the WarriorLIGHT/Spirit/Level 5/Warrior-Type/ATK 2100/DEF 1900 Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card destroys a monster by battle and inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points your opponent discards cards equal to the Level of the destroyed monster. If your opponent cannot discard anymore cards you draw cards equal to the number of cards still needed to be discarded.[/align] Image Credit: Jazinkay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 The fact its a level 5 Spirit and that it has to inflict damage and destroy an opponent's monster balances out it OP'ed effect. also, its art looks so much like this: Spirits to tier 1! Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 5, 2010 Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 that one you just need to change the effect at the end so what happens if doesn't have that many cards in his/her hand to discard? 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2010 @Canadian: i dont think it looks like that card o.o and yes i did put in the whole effect to balance out xD (if you were wondering) @ragnarok: what do you mean what happens, he cant discard anymore cards, its really self explanatory.... they stop discarding if they can't o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 @ragnarok: what do you mean what happens' date=' he cant discard anymore cards, its really self explanatory.... they stop discarding if they can't o.o[/quote'] yeah but it would be better if you write it into the effect or add another effect if he/she can't discard anymore, the picture it's nice, effect seems well to me except for that little thing ragna said above. Great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 well i guess i see what you guys meanill think it up so it stays balanced__________________ EDIT: Fixed the glitch =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 BUMP IT UP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned' date=' Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card destroys a monster by battle and inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points [b']you draw cards equal to the Level of the destroyed monster. If your opponent cannot discard anymore cards you draw cards equal to the number of cards still needed to be discarded[/b]. You messed up its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned' date=' Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card destroys a monster by battle and inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points [b']you draw cards equal to the Level of the destroyed monster. If your opponent cannot discard anymore cards you draw cards equal to the number of cards still needed to be discarded[/b]. You messed up its effect. GOD DAMITthis card is going to kill me >.>fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 well... I would said it's OP'ed but since it's an Spirit Monster and the effect it's conditional, it's a bit OP'ed IMO, anyways.. I raise to 9.5/10 >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 well... I would said it's OP'ed but since it's an Spirit Monster and the effect it's conditional' date=' it's a bit OP'ed IMO, anyways.. I raise to 9.5/10 >_<[/quote'] Thanks for your rate =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 For some reason I'm irked by Spirit Monsters without Japanese-ish names. lol. I'm not sure if you can use this on the higher Levvelled monsters with lesser ATK and DEF... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 For some reason I'm irked by Spirit Monsters without Japanese-ish names. lol. I'm not sure if you can use this on the higher Levvelled monsters with lesser ATK and DEF... 9/10 what do you mean non-Japanese-ish if i can translate it to Japanese, its a Japanese name xDand why couldn't you use it on a higher leveled monster o.obut thanks for the rating =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Creative effect.Awesome for Spirits.9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Creative effect.Awesome for Spirits.9.6/10 wow, thanks not only for keeping this going but for your ratingand i know its awesome =3 no jki just based it off other spirits reallyand thanks once more for commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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