[sp3] My Newest Card In a While

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card can only be destroyed in Battle by a LIGHT or Fairy-Type Monster. Each time this monster is attacked it gains 200 DEF. When a Monster attacks this card, the attacking monster loses 200 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard you take damage equal to this cards DEF.

 

This card can only be activated if "Vampiress Skull Thrower" is on the Field. Discard cards from your Hand(Max 5.) For the number of cards Discarded increase "Vampiress Skull Thrower's" DEF x100 for every card. Destroy 1 card on the Field.

 

CnC. I think I may need all the Help you can give.

[ragnarok1945]

Destroyed should be destroyed

 

Everytime should be Each time

 

Sent should be sent

 

it'll take a while before the burn actually have any significant effect

 

also your 1st 2 sentences contradict. You just said it can't be destroyed in battle, and that means it cannot be destroyed by ANY type of monster. Therefore, the 2nd sentence shouldn't be there.

 

So I'd remove the first sentence completely

 

A shame that's the only effect it has on the field as well, I was hoping for another effect

 

8.5/10

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Thanks Rag. And i Really couldnt think of another effect to put for a vampire, except when you attack it the monster loses attack points or something.

And ill Get right to fixing it. Thanks.

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Card has been updated and added a card

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Ugh. Bump..

[ragnarok1945]

Skull Burst's atk gaining effect is minimal

 

personally I don't see it worth the loss of than many cards, so I'd raise the atk boost higher

 

7.7/10

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Skull Burst raises it DEF. ANd you take damage equal to Skull Vampiress's DEF when she died

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The def increasing would be so slow.

Just so you know for the spell id always discard 0 cards and id destroy my opponents card.

7/10

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Ok. thanks for the Comment. anyone else?