New Gateway Monsters

[Senbanzakura]

Hey.

 

I haven't been on here forever, and I haven't made a card in ages, so, I'm a bit rusty. The following are examples of the new deck I'm working on, please correct any OCG and spelling, and suggestions. Thanks.

 

 

 

 

 

These are just samples. There are more cards coming that will make these cards make more sense.

[Shong96]

Hey.

 

I haven't been on here forever' date=' and I haven't made a card in ages, so, I'm a bit rusty. The following are examples of the new deck I'm working on, please correct any OCG and spelling, and suggestions. Thanks.

 

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These are just samples. There are more cards coming that will make these cards make more sense.

 

I think some of these cards are underpowered because for example, your first card. That is like a suicide card, whats the point of it? the second card is also very..... yeah. UNLESS you have more cards coming out that will boost these cards! and ocg errors just like me :D, i can't correct you because i make mistakes myself.

[Senbanzakura]

Well, like I said in my post, these are samples, there are more cards that would go with these effects.

[NightGuardian1764]

I saw some Official Grammar wrong, I will correct it

-Renza - Destroy all face-down cards on the field, you take 100 points of damage for each card destroyed. during the End Phase, remove this card from play.

 

-Mina - (Suggestion) 100 ATK and 0 DEF for Level 9 monster?

 

-Gateway Closed - This card can only be activated when "Gateway Open" is on your field. Special Summon 1 "Zeratara The Gateway" from your Deck. When this card is destroyed, The Special Summoned monster is sent to the Graveyard and skip your next turn.

 

-Gateway Open - As long as this card remains on the field, both players must pay 1000 Life Points to Normal Summon or Special Summon a monster. If you have "Gateway Closed", you don't have to pay any Life Point to Summon a monster.

 

About the card and effects, Very Nice,

9.4/10

[ANBU]

your second one will either have some high power support or a monster similar to how Aitsu has Koitsu im guessing.. which might make it a pretty good card..

 

the first is good for clearing if your opponent uses lots of face-downs so you can then attack them safely..

 

oh and for gateway closed the first bit should go

"This card can only be activated if there is a face-up "Gateway - Open" on your side of the Field"

(I may have missed a coupl that need capitalizing but i havent made realistics for a bit..)

 

pretty good cards overall... 9.2/10

[ragnarok1945]

end of your turn should be End Phase

 

there's some capitalization errors on the text

 

for the Gateway cards, I was hoping for more of an effect than just the summoning and that's pretty much about it

 

8/10