Ahmmed6 Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 enjoy:)I know its a little childish to put spellcaster in a name but i really had no more options, i made tons of cards and used a new name for each. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shong96 Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Card effect is nice and all but you should realy post the lore so people can read it easier. OCG errors and I'm not sure but if you were trying to spell it correctly it's "Ultimate" 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dasanies Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 ok the effect i don't even know what you hoping for. but i can correct a few spelling errors.The name should be It should be 7 stars not 12 "ultimate" This This is fixed for you "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Summoned Monster cards. You can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a SPELL or TRAP card and destroy it. This card negates any monster's effect that targets this card. You can remove one card from your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK points, equal to half of your opponent's monster(s) for the rest of your turn." ~David EmmettA for effort 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmmed6 Posted April 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Yeah sounds alot better when you type it Dansanies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathstickeR Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 Name needs work. OCG errors. needs MAJOR drawack. it's too unfair. make it say you need to pay 500 life points every 1 of your standby phases or something to balance it out. last sentence needs to be fixed and that effect should be removed entirely. i am the king of making insane cards that barely make fairness so i know an unfair card when i see one. fix those and it'll be alright. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 next time write out the lore, it was hard to read it OCG and capitalization errors aside, the effect looks fine though for the boosting effect, maybe give it a slightly more permanent effect there. It IS lv12 after all, ans 2300 atk is weak for that 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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